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Sunsplash

Golden sun rise up 
Barely beyond water's edge
I try not to peek
Yesterday's blue ocean waves
Leave me sunburned and sore


      Written for Entry to Rick Parise Sponsored Contest:

                          Blue And Gold THEME 
                               NATURE'S TANKA

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Poet Destroyer A

June 16, 2011 at 7:53 PM

sunsplah, has my attention,,, wow! very unique... but painful..lol.. i need some banana boat lotion.... super enjoyed,..Linda

Andrea Dietrich

April 14, 2011 at 11:20 PM

I enjoyed this one a lot. Very cool title for it.

Gwendolen Song

March 20, 2011 at 10:27 PM

Sun screeen!!!! SPF 30! ha ha. Nice tanka, Joe. Can't wait to see how you place in that VERY competitive quest! Gwendolen

Susie Lambert

March 19, 2011 at 6:50 PM

Beautiful!

Carolyn Devonshire

March 19, 2011 at 5:28 PM

I did just this today, Joseph. Spent the entire day fishing from a pier and watching the sun rise over the water, seeing a vast blue ocean filled with jumping dolphins. Got the sunburn. Argh! Beautiful image though. It truly is a spiritual experience being on the water like this. Thanks for writing, my friend. If this is for Rick's gold and blue contest, I think it's a winner. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 19, 2011 at 4:17 AM

Joseph am waiting for these lines to come true as Summer arrives slowly but surely luv..my favorite time of year and your Tanks and title say it all .. wonderfully expressive ..luv..

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