Sunshine Spirit

invisible beams
invigorate pristine ways
to awaken life
  as your shining smile renews
  my enthusiastic heart

©  10-23-2012

For:  Tanka Sunshine Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/25/2013 3:39:00 PM
Great Tanka, I haven't written many but I appreciate someone who does such a nice write. I see you are drawn to nature.
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Date: 11/4/2012 1:52:00 PM
beautiful indeed, Tanya
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Date: 11/2/2012 2:19:00 PM
This is beautiful Tanya... eloquently written! I'm impressed with your poetry... love and big hugs, Jack
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Date: 11/1/2012 4:02:00 AM
Love this Tanya!...the way you compare sunshine to the spirit and wonder of love is brilliant...Congratulations - Tim
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Date: 10/30/2012 11:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in "Sunshine" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/30/2012 7:53:00 AM
Sweet, uplifting, beautifully expressed... what more is there to say! Love, Jack
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Date: 10/29/2012 8:36:00 PM
TANYA..:-), CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your awesome poem in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy - Sunshine" contest. Have yourself a sweet night * Luv~PD
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Date: 10/29/2012 3:18:00 PM
mesmerizing me so, tanya... congrats with huggs!..:)
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Date: 10/29/2012 3:05:00 PM
Hi, Tanya, Big congrats to you in the tanka contest!! It was a pleasure to finally see this one.
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Date: 10/29/2012 1:34:00 PM
Congrats on your win and thanks for stopping by
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Date: 10/29/2012 11:35:00 AM
CONGRATS TANYA ON A REMARKABLE WRITE AND AWESOME WIN LUV ..
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Date: 10/29/2012 10:04:00 AM
Big congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 10/29/2012 8:22:00 AM
Very nice pivot, the last 2 lines ! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 10/29/2012 5:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy-Sunshine" contest Tanya. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/29/2012 5:40:00 AM
Congratulations friend Tanya for winning 2nd Place in my contest “Crazy Sunshine”. You filled me up with so much happiness while reading your splendid poem. Thank you so much for your full support . May the sun shines in your life always. Love/hug, Leonora
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Date: 10/29/2012 3:19:00 AM
Wonderful poem!
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Date: 10/25/2012 2:51:00 PM
this is beautiful Tanya, good luck in contest...
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Date: 10/24/2012 12:05:00 PM
Tanya,visiting your poem today - it was enjoyable to read it - a poem that I liked very much - Have a nice day. - / / oxox love from Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/23/2012 7:46:00 PM
This is quite the beautiful write, a very beautiful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious and delightful poem this evening! What a powerfully worded piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/23/2012 3:20:00 PM
I smile through my tears (I still do) and for years was overcome by strange and unimaginable fears. But I am a poet now I could pinch myself. I thank you for your poem everybody should be kind and never mean-spirited or cruel. I feel like I am waking up to more and more good days as I go through my life each day it's a new day just letting go of past shame hurt and lots of hardships to Sunshine.
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Date: 10/23/2012 2:29:00 PM
An awesome tanka for the sunshine contest. best of luck.
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Date: 10/23/2012 1:59:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today Tanya. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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