Sunshine Smile, Senryu




         


                sunshine in his dimple
                grandson pitching on God’s mound
                Bible keeps him sound


                       7/28/202
                          ~1~
  


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Eagle Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 7:31 AM
What a wonderful tribute! This was so sweet. Really enjoy this poem.
Romios Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 9:36 AM
So honored by your comment Elena! There is much feeling in this Senryu! Panagiota xxx
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July 30, 2022 at 12:56 PM
Hi Panagiota, this is a wonderful tribute Senryu, catching one of those magical sun-blessed moments. One can easily tell the love that flows. Has to be a family fave from me. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX
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July 31, 2022 at 9:34 AM
Hi Mike! Eddie is very easy to love! He is playing two baseball games this morning and tomorrow as I told Darlene, he starts school wow. I Love your expression family fave! How very special! Thank you Mike and blessings to you! Panagiota xxx
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July 28, 2022 at 3:51 PM
Hello Panagiota, this is a lovely tribute to Eddie. Hugs. Darlene xxx
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August 1, 2022 at 10:23 AM
Hello Panagiotaq, Eddie is going to school tomorrow. Wow! our children begin school in September. There is aophomore in high school! Unbelievable! Eddie is playing two baseball games! Wew! He willbe very tired. Darlene xxx
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July 31, 2022 at 9:30 AM
Darlene, hello!. His team won a game yesterday eight to nothing! That’s good. this morning he is playing two baseball games! And school starts for him tomorrow. Wow! sophomore in high school. Unbelievable! Panagiotta xxx
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July 29, 2022 at 4:21 AM
Hello Panagiota, a simple senryu about Eddie. He seems to be doing very well. Darlene xxx-ooo. Darlene
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July 28, 2022 at 4:08 PM
Thank you Darlene! It’s just a simple senryu. That caught the sun, my grandson and his abilities inn baseball and Biblical background in a moment in time! Thank you for your special visit. Panagiota xx
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July 28, 2022 at 1:35 PM
Lovely tribute to Eddie, I've said it before he's a fine young man and how proud of him you all are. Tom
Romios Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 2:10 PM
Yes, you’ve seen picture of him over the past three years. Not only that sent him best wishes. He is an appreciative lad, to be sure. All of my family has an affection for you. Panagiota xxx
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July 28, 2022 at 12:04 PM
I know how much you love him. So sweet, Pangie.
Romios Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 2:07 PM
He is my sweetheart…for sure! Just renewed! Thank you for your help and advice. Get sone sleep, please! Woofers! xxx LOL Panagiota xxx
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