Sunshine Siblings

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Two piglets out together, walking side by side, Pressing snuggly wuggly, in wonder big eyed, On the first stroll, brother and sister sunshine, As blue birds prance and sing, in green pines. Senses soon ravished, by the tales of the new, Like a thrill of thick grass, under skies so blue, Wandering in wonder, a time made for playing, When orange sun's vivid, and is always staying.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/15/2023 7:08:00 PM

This is wild, Evelyn: 'snuggly wuggly, in wonder wide-eyed.' We're talking piglets here!! Thanks for the big smiles. :) gw

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/15/2023 10:24:00 PM

I am happy for your smiles, Gershon. Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed this. Babies of all species have so much in common, mainly , being adorable. Best of wishes. :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/14/2023 11:15:00 AM

Ahhh!!! Reads like a good contender if for a contest. I like the coloring on those piglets. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/14/2023 4:09:00 PM

You are quite welcome, Sara. Thank you for your gladdening remarks.

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/13/2023 5:46:00 PM

Ah!--such an adorable write and photograph. Little goats are a hoot also. I am getting back to being an almost pure vegetarian. How can you eat something so precious....? They have real intelligent personalities. Love it!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/13/2023 10:41:00 PM

Your words bring lots of joy, Joe. Thank you very much for your comments. I would love to get to know baby goats, but haven't had the opportunity so far. I'm almost pure vegetarian, too, for health reasons, and I'm happy with it. I think animals are so smart! Hope you enjoy your week. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/13/2023 11:26:00 AM

Hello Evelyn, You paint a wonderful scene\with your words. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/13/2023 11:52:00 AM

Hello Evelyn, I can vision the scene when reding this poem. Blessings my friend. /Darlene/

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/13/2023 11:32:00 AM

Thank you, Darlene. Your appreciation is very nice! :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/13/2023 3:21:00 AM

I imagine you with a palette mixing colors.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/13/2023 10:58:00 AM

Thank you. Vivid scenes add clarity and beauty. :)