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Sunshine Siblings

Two piglets out together, walking side by side,
Pressing snuggly wuggly, in wonder big eyed,
On the first stroll, brother and sister sunshine,
As blue birds prance and sing, in green pines.

Senses soon ravished, by the tales of the new,
Like a thrill of thick grass, under skies so blue,
Wandering in wonder, a time made for playing,
When orange sun's vivid, and is always staying.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Wolf Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 7:08 PM
This is wild, Evelyn: 'snuggly wuggly, in wonder wide-eyed.' We're talking piglets here!! Thanks for the big smiles. :) gw
Buehler Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 10:24 PM
I am happy for your smiles, Gershon. Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed this. Babies of all species have so much in common, mainly , being adorable. Best of wishes. :)
Kendrick Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 11:15 AM
Ahhh!!! Reads like a good contender if for a contest. I like the coloring on those piglets. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Buehler Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 4:09 PM
You are quite welcome, Sara. Thank you for your gladdening remarks.
DiMino Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 5:46 PM
Ah!--such an adorable write and photograph. Little goats are a hoot also. I am getting back to being an almost pure vegetarian. How can you eat something so precious....? They have real intelligent personalities. Love it!
Buehler Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 10:41 PM
Your words bring lots of joy, Joe. Thank you very much for your comments. I would love to get to know baby goats, but haven't had the opportunity so far. I'm almost pure vegetarian, too, for health reasons, and I'm happy with it. I think animals are so smart! Hope you enjoy your week. :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 11:26 AM
Hello Evelyn, You paint a wonderful scene\with your words. Enjoy your day my friend.
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March 13, 2023 at 11:52 AM
Hello Evelyn, I can vision the scene when reding this poem. Blessings my friend. /Darlene/
Buehler Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 11:32 AM
Thank you, Darlene. Your appreciation is very nice! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 3:21 AM
I imagine you with a palette mixing colors.
Buehler Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 10:58 AM
Thank you. Vivid scenes add clarity and beauty. :)
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