Sunshine Shall Smile

Sunshine Shall Smile.
     By Dane Smith-Johnsen

The water drenches
The dry soil lustfully drinks.
Soon, sunshine shall smile.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Austin Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 2:49 PM
This one made me thirsty and made me smile. Congrats on the selection. Dave
Brown Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 5:36 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Dane Ann. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
July 25, 2010 at 8:22 AM
Congrats Dane Ann on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one from your wonderful collection to share with us all.. with luv..
Al-Riyami Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 3:44 AM
I Love This Haiku<3 The last Line is A Beautiful 4-o!
Fraser Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 2:25 PM
Delightful Haiku Dane, sunshine does indeed make us smile>James
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May 28, 2009 at 11:38 AM
Nice use of alliteration to provide rhythm to this poem. Let's keep that sun shining. Smiling with you. Thank you for your kind comments. Have a wonderful day. Karen
Shango Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 8:31 AM
Perfect flow instilled with heavenly peace ... bravo for this write.
Stacey Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 10:33 AM
Hi Dane, love this haiku and the image it creates for me. Thanks for all your nice comments, i really appreciate them.
Winter Avatar
May 23, 2009 at 2:06 PM
It's been smiling here all day! Just beautiful! Love, Shar
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May 23, 2009 at 8:49 AM
Amazing haiku! Good write- jeremiah
Higgins Avatar
May 23, 2009 at 7:03 AM
The second line is awesome....wonderfully done haiku.
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