Sunshine Shall Smile

Sunshine Shall Smile. By Dane Smith-Johnsen The water drenches The dry soil lustfully drinks. Soon, sunshine shall smile.

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Daver Austin

Date: 7/28/2010 2:49:00 PM

This one made me thirsty and made me smile. Congrats on the selection. Dave

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/26/2010 5:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Dane Ann. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/25/2010 8:22:00 AM

Congrats Dane Ann on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one from your wonderful collection to share with us all.. with luv..

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 6/15/2009 3:44:00 AM

I Love This Haiku<3 The last Line is A Beautiful 4-o!

James Fraser

Date: 6/2/2009 2:25:00 PM

Delightful Haiku Dane, sunshine does indeed make us smile>James

Date: 5/28/2009 11:38:00 AM

Nice use of alliteration to provide rhythm to this poem. Let's keep that sun shining. Smiling with you. Thank you for your kind comments. Have a wonderful day. Karen

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/26/2009 8:31:00 AM

Perfect flow instilled with heavenly peace ... bravo for this write.

Paul Stacey

Date: 5/25/2009 10:33:00 AM

Hi Dane, love this haiku and the image it creates for me. Thanks for all your nice comments, i really appreciate them.

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/23/2009 2:06:00 PM

It's been smiling here all day! Just beautiful! Love, Shar

Edward Orozco

Date: 5/23/2009 8:49:00 AM

Amazing haiku! Good write- jeremiah

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/23/2009 7:03:00 AM

The second line is awesome....wonderfully done haiku.