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Author's Notes: This poem, "Sunshine Radiance," is written in Blank Verse format and is set in Iambic Pentameter (IP) and does not rhyme, which gives its verses a flavor of more flexibility. The subject is one of my classic favorites, that is, "love" -- and it touches on the deeper theme of two person's shared love being part of a true "sunshine radiance." The words and verses say the rest. Enjoy this write!! (Gary Bateman - July 7, 2015)

Categories: allegory, emotions, feelings, i love you, inspiration, love, and spiritual.

Blank Verse Notes:

Meter: IP / Verses: 10 / Words: 82

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Sunshine Radiance Your love is my true sunshine radiance, That greets me every day with such passion. It sets my heart and emotions afire! Words often fail me at times dearest one, As I seek to share the depth of my love For you and how it makes me feel daily. The brightest of moons and stars in Heaven Can’t match the splendor you bring to my life. My heart is joyful when we touch and kiss! Our love basks in your sunshine radiance! Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved (July 7, 2015) (Blank Verse)

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Robert Lindley

Date: 7/28/2015 11:10:00 PM

I hope that your darling wife loved this fine poem my friend! A7 You do this romance thing so very well. * wink...

Gary Bateman
Date: 7/30/2015 10:55:00 AM

Hello Robert!! I know too, Sir, that you are also quite gifted writing these romantic pieces. Thanks of the 7 -- of course!! And yes, Ingrid now calls me "The Love Poet"!! I told her though to get ready for Halloween. All of October will be dark, macabre, scary poems!! Cheers and Best!! Gary

Yolanda Scott

Date: 7/26/2015 11:05:00 PM

Beautiful write. All smiles here. I'm sure your wife is smiling too!!! Just beautiful!!!

Gary Bateman
Date: 7/30/2015 11:01:00 AM

Thanks Yolanda!! Yes, my wife Ingrid does read all of my poems. (Which is a good thing, see keeps me straight!!) HA!! HA!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 7/13/2015 3:53:00 AM

Hi G!Very beautifully painted romantic,sweet love poem my dear friend Gary.I truly enjoyed it.Just beautiful!Golden pen!A 7 + and a fav!:)Sending love n' prayers to you and Ingrid.All the best to you too always,G!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you always!:)D.

Gary Bateman
Date: 7/13/2015 4:09:00 AM

Hello D!! Glad you liked this Blank Verse write. Thanks for the "7"!! I found this particular format set in IP to be of particular interest. (I believe this non-rhymed, iambic pentameter verse write format dates back to the days of Geoffrey Chaucer.) Take Care "D" -- And best wishes to you from Ingrid and Me!! Cheers, Gary

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 7/10/2015 4:48:00 PM

blinding piece gary very beautifully crafted as always dazzled in your golden pen wishing you both a blessed beautiful week

Gary Bateman
Date: 7/10/2015 5:29:00 PM

Liam Mate!! Thanks for your read here and your comments. Yes -- The Leprechaun Choir is singing verses of joy over my Blank Verse write here on "Sunshine Radiance." I guess I'm on my way now to becoming a true "Love Poet"!! (HA!! HA!!) Cheers Mate, Gary

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/8/2015 10:09:00 AM

Gary shimmering in your lines is love and beauty!!!WOW~Olive Eloisa =")

Gary Bateman
Date: 7/8/2015 11:15:00 AM

Yes Olive Eloisa . . . I have now become an official "Love Poet" or so says my wife Ingrid (HA!! HA!!). I pleased you liked this Blank Verse write!! Best Always, Gary

Theresa Cw

Date: 7/8/2015 1:25:00 AM

Wow, how much love can be a very beautiful splendor thing in anyone's life so true. You have brought forth a great deal of passion in this written poetic form. Beautiful words from a well gifted man. A firm 7 from I, Theresa

Gary Bateman
Date: 7/8/2015 11:45:00 AM

Hello Theresa!! Thanks for your read, review, and most wonderful comments. And for the "7" too!! This Blank Verse format was just perfect for me, for this particular love theme. Looks like I made a good choice!! Thanks again!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/7/2015 5:27:00 PM

Gary, this piece shinned brilliantly. Each verse displayed a deep love and appreciation. It was very romantic. You get a 7 from me:-)Alexis

Gary Bateman
Date: 7/8/2015 12:12:00 PM

Thank you so much Alexis for your read and gracious comments -- and for the "seven" too!! Glad you enjoyed it!! Cheers, Gary

Jan Allison

Date: 7/7/2015 2:45:00 PM

what a wonderful romantic write Gary:-) Hugs Jan xx 7

Gary Bateman
Date: 7/7/2015 3:22:00 PM

Thanks Jan!! The love themes are always quite interesting to explore. Glad you liked this one. Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/7/2015 2:15:00 PM

- Words never fail you when you write about love and romance, dear Gary - This really is made of top quality - I posted "A Sigh" today, my footle was just for fun - T.R.+ fav. at this marvelous love poem !!! - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman
Date: 7/7/2015 3:28:00 PM

Dear Anne-Lise, Thanks so much for your note here and for the top rating and fav!! Both are greatly appreciated. I guess the love and romance genre has become for sure one of my specialties. After all, "love is what makes the world go around!!" I did like your Footle and did find it quite funny!! I will check out "A Sigh." Cheers . . . and have a great evening!! Gary

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/7/2015 2:03:00 PM

A beautiful romantic gift that would warm any woman's heart Gary. You have expressed so eloquently what so many men would like to utter but are at a loss to capture with their words. 7

Gary Bateman
Date: 7/7/2015 2:13:00 PM

Hello Connie!! Thanks for your really gracious words here, and it pleases me that you liked this write. Although I'm actually a multi-thematic writer, my wife, Ingrid now calls me "The Love Poet." I told her though that come October, it will be a month of dark writes only!! (HA, HA). Love is that one emotion that's so evocative and is so much a part of our lives. Thanks for the "7" too. Best Always, Gary