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Premiere Contest WinnerSunshine Doth Quench a Beautiful Day Qd

Through the wet willows, we stumble on Right in mid of autumn, perfect days. With first breath, the wakeful light of dawn A mystique flaming fire rise a blaze In the distant horizon, upon Hope, this perfect time didn't drift a-ways As gray, slow, swirl clouds and nearer drawn While the sun is rising. Nature plays Immersed under waves of warm sunshine. 9/29/2019
rhyme pattern ABAB, ABAB, C. 9 lines, with 9 syllables per line Poetry Contest: Queen Of Day 9 x 9 Sponsored by: Charles Messina Photo taken by my nephew Randy Looman September 2019
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De Beaulieu Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 2:16 PM
Hello Eve Roper, this is such a beautiful poem. Enjoy your day my friend.
Allison Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 5:51 PM
A beautiful poem and I loved the picture too Eve, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Goldsmith Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 12:09 PM
Congratulations...... What a great win, poem & picture....
Agustin Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 9:59 PM
Wow! Congrats your picturesque piece. God bless you.
Dutta Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 7:29 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP on your wonderful poem. Hugs.
Godwin Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 9:19 PM
Congratulations, Sweetie - great poem. Love, CayCay
Gauthier Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 9:19 AM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Eve.
Warrior Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 8:30 AM
Congrats!! on the top podium win Eve...truly a marvelous verse my friend...^WW^...:o)
Mcgee Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 8:19 AM
a beautiful write. Congratulations Eve on your 1st place.
Messina Avatar
October 19, 2019 at 7:26 AM
This was beautifully written Eve. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Charlie
Mcintosh Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 12:01 AM
Beautiful poem. God bless you always :)
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