Sotto Poet Poet Haiku

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Sunshine Bedimmed

the light had twisted
a duress that was looming
high tide in the sea

typhoon chastises
jade water over the bow
jaded on the bridge 

thunderstorms floating
level of brightness in spots
out of the azure

after ships are docked
when you foretaste a rainbow
the sunlight advent

Written: April 19, 2022

A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Jennifer Proxenos April 21, 2022 at 12:07 PM Your talent just grows and grows, like a beautiful flowers, you water and feed them to perfection which results in a beautiful presentation of a garden of poetic grandeur. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Victor Buhagiar April 20, 2022 at 1:51 AM Your haikus are splendid So much imagery. Best for a win.

Vijay Pandit April 19, 2022 at 1:58 PM You captured well, images of sunset, Lasaad. Not easy to write linked haikus as you did so expertly.

Darlene De Beaulieu April 19, 2022 at 10:07 AM Hello Lasaad, as I read this poem i could vision the sunset. Beautiful. Blessings my friend.