Sunshine Bedimmed

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the light had twisted a duress that was looming high tide in the sea typhoon chastises jade water over the bow jaded on the bridge thunderstorms floating level of brightness in spots out of the azure after ships are docked when you foretaste a rainbow the sunlight advent Written: April 19, 2022 A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/21/2022 12:07:00 PM

Your talent just grows and grows, like a beautiful flowers, you water and feed them to perfection which results in a beautiful presentation of a garden of poetic grandeur. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/20/2022 1:51:00 AM

Your haikus are splendid So much imagery. Best for a win.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/19/2022 1:58:00 PM

You captured well, images of sunset, Lasaad. Not easy to write linked haikus as you did so expertly.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/19/2022 10:07:00 AM

Hello Lasaad, as I read this poem i could vision the sunset. Beautiful. Blessings my friend.