Liam Mcdaid Poet Senryu

Sunshine Beams

It's amazing to 
see you smile sweet beauty lights
blushes warm the soul

Looking behind the 
mirrors a reflection stares
straight back at you love

Sparkling in the mist
when rainbow colors sprinkle 
magic precious gem

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Charmaine Chircop October 14, 2014 at 10:32 AM The warmth of the sunbeams reflect so beautifully through the mirror of your verse Liam. Liam Mcdaid October 14, 2014 at 10:44 AM thank you kindly charmaine truly very beautiful comment dear friend heartfelt appreciated bless you

Gary Bateman October 13, 2014 at 4:42 PM Liam, A most wonderful write here Mate!! You've employed the Senryu form well to achieve a vivid and compelling reflection of you of the theme and associated imagery. Extraordinary Job!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary Liam Mcdaid October 13, 2014 at 7:26 PM thank you so much gary drawing how warm a smile draws to the mirrors sunshine to the soul warm if that makes sense smiling wonderful comment dear friend sending you an irish blessing

Darlene Gifford October 13, 2014 at 11:24 AM I enjoyed reading your poem with all its wonderful imagery. Very inspiring! Liam Mcdaid October 13, 2014 at 7:20 PM thank you darlene for the dazzling comment heartfelt beautiful deeply appreciated

Paul Callus October 13, 2014 at 9:00 AM I love these senryu, Liam....all three radiate positivity. Well done! // paul Liam Mcdaid October 13, 2014 at 9:37 AM thank you paul wonderful comment heartfelt deeply appreciated dear friend