Sunshine and Showers

Every dusk of the dawn he rises to immanent blues
                                                 Melancholia like echolalia embraces his morning
Combatting the blaze and blinded by mourning
                                             He settles for the day whatever the weather inside
Scorching steps in the heat he rides waves of the river

                                             Tears have dried up the rays of light that were his
And will be when solar floods shadow muddy prisms

                                  He is a dweller quelling in sadness for what seems eternal
Moments and yet his sorrow is finite will be kindled by love

                            Saved by a rainforest of shelter in the warmth of her kindness
He kindles Mother Earth and wakes up to his soul mates’ smile

                               Before long when his whine has turned water he drinks from
The fountain ingests the fire on his skin saved and restored
                               Soon Sunna and Neptune dance in tune with each other and
Showered by sunshine reigns of rainfall enlighten what becomes

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Date: 2/24/2018 7:54:00 PM
Congrats on your placement, Kai. Well done.
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Date: 2/21/2018 10:46:00 AM
I love it. Well done :)
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Date: 2/21/2018 7:57:00 AM
A great description of your day Kai which you have expressed in lovely fashion ...Maria
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 2/28/2018 2:41:00 AM
Thank you. And then there is snowfall here in Wales. Let the day begin...
Date: 2/19/2018 9:57:00 AM
You wake up to the captivating embrace of inspiration, Kai! Contrasting moods are expressed in lovely poetic techniques. ~ Regards // paul
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 2/19/2018 10:03:00 AM
Thank you very much for that Paul. Sort of self-motivation, but it is very nice to receive your compliment.
Date: 2/18/2018 7:24:00 AM
You captured the melancholic feelings well in this poem..I liked the ending..best for a win, Kai.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 2/19/2018 2:20:00 AM
Thank you Vijay. And the poem is honest. That is how my mornings are and then the day unfolds, Kai
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