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birds in summer sun fluff their feathers comb with beaks spruce up in sunshine winter is a grind wind is strong rain is heavy not time for preening

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Date: 7/14/2023 11:22:00 AM
Nicely contrasted with winter. Congrats.
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John Anderson
Date: 7/14/2023 12:57:00 PM
I'm an avid bird watcher here downunder! It's winter time.
Date: 7/14/2023 9:53:00 AM
Very creative John! Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
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John Anderson
Date: 7/14/2023 10:05:00 AM
Thanks Sam, Cheers and Good times!
Date: 7/12/2023 6:23:00 PM
John, congrats on your win with your creative haiku! Blessings, Kim M
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John Anderson
Date: 7/12/2023 6:32:00 PM
Nice to hear from you and thanks heaps. Cheers and Best Wishes.
Date: 7/12/2023 9:36:00 AM
- Lovely written, John :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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John Anderson
Date: 7/12/2023 9:45:00 AM
Thanks so much, Best Wishes
Date: 7/12/2023 5:21:00 AM
John, congratulations on your winning placement, enjoyed the bird imagery!
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John Anderson
Date: 7/12/2023 9:46:00 AM
Lovely to hear from you. Cheers!

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