Sunshine

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birds in summer sun fluff their feathers comb with beaks spruce up in sunshine winter is a grind wind is strong rain is heavy not time for preening

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2023 11:22:00 AM

Nicely contrasted with winter. Congrats.

John Anderson
Date: 7/14/2023 12:57:00 PM

I'm an avid bird watcher here downunder! It's winter time.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/14/2023 9:53:00 AM

Very creative John! Congratulations on your win! Blessings.

John Anderson
Date: 7/14/2023 10:05:00 AM

Thanks Sam, Cheers and Good times!

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/12/2023 6:23:00 PM

John, congrats on your win with your creative haiku! Blessings, Kim M

John Anderson
Date: 7/12/2023 6:32:00 PM

Nice to hear from you and thanks heaps. Cheers and Best Wishes.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/12/2023 9:36:00 AM

- Lovely written, John :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs

John Anderson
Date: 7/12/2023 9:45:00 AM

Thanks so much, Best Wishes

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/12/2023 5:21:00 AM

John, congratulations on your winning placement, enjoyed the bird imagery!

John Anderson
Date: 7/12/2023 9:46:00 AM

Lovely to hear from you. Cheers!