Line Gauthier Poet Haiku

Sunset's reprise

sunset's reprise of
waves clashing against a cliff
~ the passing of time



AP: 1st place 2025

Submitted on May 21, 2019 for contest WRITING CHALLENGE 3, MAY 2019 NATURE HAIKU sponsored by DEAR HEART  -  RANKED 2ND

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M. L. Kiser May 30, 2019 at 4:51 PM You have forced me to "fav" this one...beautiful. Line Gauthier May 30, 2019 at 10:36 PM Thank you so much, ML, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.

Eve Roper May 27, 2019 at 9:52 PM Great image, Line, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Line Gauthier May 30, 2019 at 10:37 PM Thank you so much, Eve.

Constance La France May 27, 2019 at 9:45 AM Line congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful haiku ! Line Gauthier May 27, 2019 at 2:18 PM Thanks, Constance. It was a fun contest as always.

Andrea Dietrich May 26, 2019 at 3:01 PM Yes, we can liken this to life. Good comparison, Line. Congrats for your win. Line Gauthier May 26, 2019 at 3:47 PM Thanks, Andrea. Most appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 26, 2019 at 1:58 PM - Returns with a congratulations, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Line Gauthier May 26, 2019 at 3:47 PM Thank you, Sunshine. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger May 24, 2019 at 9:12 AM I am seeing a theme, and I like it a lot, Line. For it makes sense. Line Gauthier May 24, 2019 at 10:00 AM Thanks, Caren.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 24, 2019 at 5:18 AM - Very well done, Line - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Line Gauthier May 24, 2019 at 8:42 AM Thank you, Sunshine, for your much appreciated visit and comment/

Tania Kitchin May 24, 2019 at 5:16 AM A beautiful haiku, Line! Line Gauthier May 24, 2019 at 8:42 AM Thanks, Tania. Much appreciated.

Tom Cunningham May 23, 2019 at 9:02 PM Can just see it Line each time it breaks on the cliff it's time passed. Soup mail. Tom Line Gauthier May 24, 2019 at 8:43 AM Thanks, Tom. Much appreciate your visit under the Kefalonia sun.

William Kelii Kekaula May 23, 2019 at 7:59 PM Living here brings your muse to life Line, best wishes, Aloha wk Line Gauthier May 23, 2019 at 8:10 PM Hawaiian sunsets ! My muse would be on fire too. I can dream. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, William.

Gershon Wolf May 23, 2019 at 6:43 PM You have such an uncanny, metaphorical knack of presenting concepts via nature. Lovely!! :) gw Line Gauthier May 23, 2019 at 7:20 PM Thank you so much for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Gershon.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. May 23, 2019 at 6:17 PM Nicely penned Line Line Gauthier May 23, 2019 at 7:20 PM Thank you so much, Allen.

P.S. Awtry May 23, 2019 at 10:36 AM contemplative write, dear Line... excellent as always. :) Line Gauthier May 23, 2019 at 11:02 AM Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, PS.

Kim Rodrigues May 23, 2019 at 9:54 AM Love the imagery! Monotonous and almost like banging one’s head against the wall...time moving slow, rhythmic, etc.. Line Gauthier May 23, 2019 at 11:03 AM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim. Sometimes a little headbanging is needed. LOL

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 23, 2019 at 9:16 AM Erosion, in the dying light; gorgeous, powerful imagery Line. This, a winner for me, my best to you in the contest :) xomo Line Gauthier May 23, 2019 at 9:52 AM I appreciate your lovely compliment, Maureen. Thanks.