Len Gasun Poet Triolet

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 Inspired by one of my Acrylic Painting entitled, Sunset Warm Embraces

Sunset Warm Embraces

Thy warm embraces capture the zenith of my strength
Glints in your hazel eyes connect the dots with no ends
‘Tis passionate love resonating its infinite length
Thy warm embraces capture the zenith of my strength.
You are God’s precious gift-million miles far beyond tenth
For these tender kisses, I hold my breath to extend.
Thy warm embraces capture the zenith of my strength
Sunset ensures God’s great love… through you, He always sends.




March 23, 2014   2.30pm
©2014by Leonora Galinta




 Second Place
Contest: Any Poem Goes # 18
Judged: 4/16/2014
Sponsor: My Greatest Poet/Poet sis PD

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Poet Destroyer A May 28, 2014 at 11:53 AM Hello My dearest sis and BFF... I am humble to your visits this morning... I am glad you wrote a poem for my contest... Please enter the same poem in my sister's contest... We are running a similar slam contest... Thank you for all the wonderful comments on my comments... Linda

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 17, 2014 at 1:25 AM Beautiful poem Leonora n a great win !

Debbie Guzzi April 16, 2014 at 7:03 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Joyce Johnson April 16, 2014 at 11:50 AM So you are doubly talented, both artist and poet. Congratulations on a big win. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta April 16, 2014 at 9:39 AM Happy to see you on the winner's list. Congrats, Leo

Paul Callus April 16, 2014 at 9:15 AM Just stopping by to congratulate you on an other merited win :) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 16, 2014 at 5:35 AM :) awesome inspiring write.. :) + CONGRATULATIONS! =OLIVE_ELOI

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 16, 2014 at 5:34 AM :) awesome inspiring write.. :) + CONGRATULATIONS! =OLIVE_ELOI

Verlena S. Walker April 16, 2014 at 4:21 AM Beautiful Leonora. Congratulations on your win... Verlena

Poet Destroyer A April 16, 2014 at 2:01 AM Hello, My sweet lovely sis... Thank you so much for enjoying my contest... Please stop by and say hello the next time you are on line... Miss you.. XOX~ forever your BFF... LINDA Poet Destroyer A April 16, 2014 at 2:04 AM Helly lovely sis... I just wanted you to know, I have my notification reply button off... I noticed you left me a lot of replies on my comments.. it makes me sad that i missed just about every one of them.....

Paul Callus April 6, 2014 at 7:38 AM Well executed Triolet Leonora! strong ... expressive strokes, but then no wonder, the artist in you is reflected here :) /x/ paul

Carrie Richards April 2, 2014 at 1:26 PM Another beauty, you write with such tranquility, dear Leonora. ps.......I am so grateful that you approved of my entry in your umbrella contest. Thank you very much,,, it is an honor! Len Gasun April 5, 2014 at 3:10 PM Thank u so much for your precious time stopping by & for your very encouraging comments my dear friend Carrie. You're much welcome. I just enjoyed your wonderful poem. Big hugs!

Skat A April 1, 2014 at 11:20 PM Uplifting beautiful poem......... luv ~SKAT~ Len Gasun April 5, 2014 at 3:11 PM Thank u, thank u so much my dearest Skat for your very inspiring and encouraging comments! Biggest hugs to u and your family! I love u all! More blessings!

Poet Destroyer A April 1, 2014 at 1:47 PM Hello, MY sweet sis... A beautiful poem, you did well embracing the greatest love. I love the hazel tint. You sure know how to turn a cold day warm, with your gracious words and loving heart.... Love ya, My BFF... Linda Len Gasun April 5, 2014 at 3:17 PM Hi! Biggest hugs! Thank u thank u sooo much for your precious time stopping by (& so with our dearest sis Skat) & your very encouraging & wonderful comments on my poem. Always my honor to hear from my all time fave poets. Can't stop thanking u my ever dearest sis & BFF for everything! I love u & so with dear Skat! Hugs, hugs & kisses!

Donna Jones March 29, 2014 at 8:29 PM Lovely Leonora..what a grand poem...that last line is magical... Len Gasun April 5, 2014 at 3:20 PM Thank u so much my dear fried Donna for your precious time stopping by and your very encouraging comments. More blessings! I'll visit your poetry soon. Big hugs!

Phyllis Babcock March 29, 2014 at 10:10 AM Nicely done and a talented artist as well. love phyl Len Gasun April 5, 2014 at 3:23 PM Hi, my very dear friend Phyllis. You don't know how happy I am to see you here today with your very encouraging commenst from u. I'll visit your page again soon. Always take care of yourself. Biggest hugs!

Funom Makama March 25, 2014 at 4:33 PM What a heart-filled poem! Thanks for the share. I feel so privileged reading this Len Gasun March 29, 2014 at 5:12 AM Thank u my dear friend Funom. I'm honored with you lovely visit. Big hugs!

Vincent Flannery March 25, 2014 at 4:00 PM Great piece Leonora. Must be a beautiful painting. Thank You for your comment and take care. Len Gasun March 29, 2014 at 5:14 AM Thank u my dear friend Vincent. TC and hugs!

Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2014 at 4:49 PM wow, I like the back story of your poem and how you used the Avatar picture. You are multi talented, my dear!! I love how you try new forms and how you did a very lovely triolet here. Yes, I love rondeau and have many of them now. Len Gasun March 29, 2014 at 5:16 AM Thank u my dear friend Andrea. I just try to write a poem with one of my paintings. Hope i did it right for the second attempt. Big hugs!

Shadow Hamilton March 24, 2014 at 4:48 PM fantastic and so romantic Leonora great pen Len Gasun March 29, 2014 at 5:16 AM Thank u my dear friend Shadow. Big hugs!

Deb Wilson March 24, 2014 at 9:41 AM This is so beautiful...well done ! love,Deb Len Gasun March 29, 2014 at 5:17 AM Thank u my dear friend Deb. Big hugs!

Aiyah Torres March 24, 2014 at 8:13 AM WoW!! so impressive... Poet is a great painter indeed... and you are the living proof my dearest ,Leo.. !!! nice poem.. and great artwork!! ..blessed be ^__^ oxoxox Len Gasun March 29, 2014 at 5:19 AM Thank u my dear friend Aiyah for a your very encouraging words. I was just trying. I hope I did it right. Big hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen March 24, 2014 at 4:59 AM - Do you really painted this picture yourself Leonora!! - You are an artist both in words and pictures - really impressed!! - Love both: the picture and your beautiful poem!! - Have a nice new week my dear friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Len Gasun March 29, 2014 at 5:20 AM Yes, my dear friend. I'm happy you like both my painting and poem. Thanks a lot for your inspiring words. Len Gasun March 29, 2014 at 5:20 AM Big hugs!

Russell Sivey March 24, 2014 at 4:37 AM This is so beautiful and touching my friend! I surely enjoyed reading this delightful awe inspiring poem here this morning! You bring tears to my eyes of loveliness and grandeur! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!! Len Gasun March 29, 2014 at 5:21 AM Thank you again my dear friend for your lovely visit and your inspiring words. Big hugs!