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SUNSET TABLEAU

Sunset Tableau She had been taken suddenly, too soon no tears, or sadness all else just faded in golden aura signaling good-bye. John G. Lawless For Nette onclaud Design Your Tableau - Poetry Contest 10/15/2014 “One day I saw the sun set forty-four times!’ … ‘You know, when you’re feeling very sad, sunsets are wonderful.”

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Date: 10/29/2014 9:51:00 AM
Great one about the topic chosen..I enjoyed reading your winner..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 10/25/2014 9:15:00 PM
Your poem really goes well with that quote, John. Big congrats in this contest.
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John lawless
Date: 10/26/2014 12:02:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, always good to hear from you.
Date: 10/25/2014 5:59:00 PM
This is excellent, John! Would have liked to see poem higher up the list...congratulations! Like the setting sun, a child's life can also be taken away too soon, but then that would leave sadness and tears. // paul
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John lawless
Date: 10/26/2014 12:02:00 AM
Thanks Paul for your kind words
Date: 10/25/2014 1:22:00 PM
Really like this one John..congrats!
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John lawless
Date: 10/26/2014 12:00:00 AM
Thank you David glad you liked it.
Date: 10/25/2014 7:26:00 AM
- There are many that I have read before .... and many who not arrived at the winners list .... but, everyone can not win! - Really hard to judge .... (glad it's not me :) - In my eyes, everyone is so beautiful written! - CONGRATULATIONS !!! - Have a restful and lovely weekend,John - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/25/2014 5:38:00 AM
Very nicely done poem, congrats on the win, John
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Date: 10/25/2014 5:11:00 AM
John congratulations on your well deserved win.
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John lawless
Date: 10/26/2014 12:00:00 AM
Thank You Maurice for checking in and checking back.
Date: 10/25/2014 5:10:00 AM
What a stunning poetic description of a sunset.
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Date: 10/24/2014 6:25:00 PM
Congratulations, John. Great tableau. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/24/2014 5:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win John.
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John lawless
Date: 10/25/2014 11:59:00 PM
Thanks Brenda
Date: 10/24/2014 4:03:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations John:-) hugs Jan xxx
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John lawless
Date: 10/25/2014 11:58:00 PM
Thanks Jan, as always, for your support.
Date: 10/16/2014 3:30:00 AM
simply stunning John - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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