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Sunset Somewhere

Swept away in a spaceship with a Captain Dylan Hunt, by name. He looks just like Kevin Sorbo of television's "Hercules" fame. I'm not sure which is more shocking, this galaxy quest or the hunk. Hope this ship can make the journey. It rattles like a piece of junk. Stopping off at some distant planet for repairs on this bucket of bolts. We leave the ship for shore leave. What we see gives us both jolts. In the evening sky overhead are three moons in the dark green sky with rainbow coloured rings 'round one. It's true ! I wouldn't lie. As the sage coloured sky darkens to a deep, deep hunter green the smallest moon changes colours. Strangest thing I've ever seen. The middle moon, with rainbow rings, is the largest of the three. The hunky captain and I take a seat and talk about what we see. The third moon in the sky above seems to be quite close by, It is a gorgeous shade of peach, the prettiest in the sky. Apparently, the ship is fixed and now its time to go. I so enjoyed the sunset here. The moons put on quite a show. Off to the next galaxy, the hunky captain and I, looking forward to many more sunsets on many more planets in the sky. p.s. I'm NOT going home. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ for Paula Swanson's "Not Just Any Sunset " contest 07/08/2011

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Date: 8/23/2011 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Paula's "Not Just Any Sunset" contest Francine. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/21/2011 11:52:00 AM
Congrats Francine on your fabulous fourth place win with excellent expressive poetry myf friend..luv..
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Date: 8/21/2011 4:07:00 AM
A fine win, congrats to you!
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Date: 8/20/2011 4:46:00 PM
very funny and entertaining, Francine. Gave me incentive to go work out some! : ) congrats to you on a great win
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Date: 8/20/2011 3:55:00 PM
hey Francine congrats on your win Dave
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Date: 8/20/2011 3:48:00 PM
Francine: Congratulations on your win in the Not Just Any Sunset...contest sponsored by Paula Swanson. Very challenging! And...I don't blame you for not going home...lol Caryl Ramsdale
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Date: 8/14/2011 5:22:00 PM
Hey, quite an imagination you have. Very creative and entertaining. great write. Steve
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Date: 8/11/2011 10:54:00 AM
Wow. this is really great Francine..... such a pleasure to read...thanks for sharing....
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Date: 8/9/2011 10:23:00 PM
:D I wouldn't go home if I had such a sexy captain at my side, Francine. Hope both of you "Live long and prosper" as Spock would have said. Love the way you describe the green sky with the rainbow rings. Awesome! Best wishes in Paula's contest. This is a fun contest, isn't it? Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/9/2011 1:28:00 AM
Wow, Francine...You are great at writing poetry AND you have good taste in shoes...Sounds like a winning combination to me :) Great job w/ this poem-should definitely be a winner!
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Date: 8/8/2011 10:34:00 AM
very cool and concise Francine ..super descriptive and a journey we all want to take to see this sunset luv.. very expressive lines with wit and imagery ..good luck in the contest...
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