Sunset Shiverings


                       Sunset Shiverings


                When the sun goes down
                we shiver, it's cold!
                Stop complaining, you look so old!
                Inside,don a warm sweater.
                Ah, yes~ so much better!
                Now light the fireplace
                Warm my chilled hands.
                My lips.
                Glow!


                     November 16, 2019


Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 9/2/2022 3:02:00 AM
fun write
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/2/2022 11:06:00 AM
Yolanda, hi! I have a Cousin Yolanda in Wisconsin. You make the second Yolanda in my life.this was a fuzzy pleasure to write. One of my latest poems, Wine Country, USA tells how hot it is here now! Ouch! Thank you, Yolandsa Pangie xx
Date: 9/1/2022 11:45:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, when a couple is watching the sunset they have each other for warmth. then go inside and light up the fireplace to snuggle together and feel the warmth. Hugs xxx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/3/2022 3:19:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, thank you. Yes we all can relate to. One day when looking for something else you will find it. Hugs xxx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/2/2022 11:11:00 AM
Hello Darlene! What a lovely scene you created in your comment that we all can relate, too. I wrote a poem about that. But don’t know where to find it, Thank you for commenting, Hugs, Pangie xx Soupmail in half an hour!
Date: 5/4/2022 9:13:00 PM
there i was on a sunny beach in Mexico when i was to meet a woman from Minnesota, born in sunny Arizona, worked in sunny California and alas, went to Minnesota for a decade....no truer lines have been written than yours...thanks for the remembrances of those chilly daily closings
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/4/2022 10:38:00 PM
Hi Tim! Golly from the West to the Midwest? Ouch. I lived in Chicago for 30 years, then headed West. Love it, So sad you lost your woman. But memories shine like gold nuggets! Or warm fireplaces. Yours Pangie, great hearing from you. Great to hear from you,
Date: 12/9/2019 10:52:00 AM
Absolutely enjoyed your nonet, Panagiota.. So warm and lovely! Feeling cozy now.. A fave for me! Have a blessed day, my friend..
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/9/2019 11:13:00 AM
How glad you liked this...and FAVEd it..stay warm Panagiota
Date: 11/17/2019 7:57:00 PM
Good formula for warmth midst the shivers! :) gw
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/17/2019 8:57:00 PM
Yes, Panagiota
Date: 11/17/2019 11:30:00 AM
Nothing like starting a fire, outside and in
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/17/2019 11:43:00 AM
Agree100 per cent
Date: 11/17/2019 8:58:00 AM
My friend, I have never written a Nonet. Yours is truly inspiring and reminds me that giving thanks for what we have is key to a far happier life! A fav..
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/17/2019 10:02:00 AM
Hello Robert, I thought I would try the Nonet This, indeed was a fun write. Gratitude goes a long way. Your visit, appreciated.) Panagiota x
Date: 11/16/2019 4:33:00 PM
Panagiota, I like this poem wrapped in the warmth of a sweater in cold sunset. As the saying goes 'Cold hands, warm heart'. -Richard
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/16/2019 5:08:00 PM
Check for the quote. "Cold feet, warm heart" Mouse needs a snooze. Squeak- squeak, PR
Date: 11/16/2019 2:19:00 PM
A nice nonet Panagiota ! :)
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/16/2019 3:51:00 PM
Heidi, thank you have a good weekend. Panagiota xx
Date: 11/16/2019 1:52:00 PM
- Lovely written, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/16/2019 3:50:00 PM
Bless you for commenting, Anne-Lise! Panagiotaxx
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