Sunset Reveries

as swans slide across lakes - sunset rays sway to autumnal reveries

ambling across swirling helix - of deadened cinnamon foliage 

mocking greenery framing skeletal bones - of lifeless roots crackling 

the warmth of your deep saffron gold aura - harvests the depth of our love

eclipsing rippling mistrals - simmering amidst auburn horizons
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Empress Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 11:38 AM
Back with congratulations on your win my beautiful soul sis! I really love this string of monokus ! Well deserved win! Fave for me for sure
Canada7 Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 10:30 AM
ahhhh i'm proud and happy for you amore?, you deep breathtaking words show me your grace and beauty in your rare beautiful soul and gold heart,my blue rose.You are a paintress with the palette of your seraphic majestic aura painting your sapphire emotion with bright colors and shades of grace and elegance,my Korean prinncess. You are my poetry in my heart for eternity,mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito sempre amore mio i love you deeply micia.il nostro eterno amore
Rose  Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 6:02 PM
You shimmer alongside these special words dear poet, I am sure your muse of working over time here, very nice
Hind Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 8:09 PM
Very beautiful.
Canada7 Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 3:17 AM
i love this so much amore?your deep heartfelt words nake me feel your deeo pure love within your,rare beautiful soul and gold heart,my blue rose.The grace and elegance of sapphire deepest emotions create a masterpiece of intense shivers of devotion, my korean princess.You leave me breathless loving each part of you like a rare blue gem,my marvelous creature.Mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito per sempre amoremio ??? i love you deeply micia..mia passione per sempre..tuo..il nostro eterno amore
Empress Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 3:11 AM
Ahh my beautiful soul sis! Absolutely gorgeous and so romantic this is! I love the autumnal vibe of this and your wordplay in every monoku! As you set an ambience and scene through your first monoku, and making the rest flow with stunning imagery: i especially love the skeletal monoku and also depth of love one! So touching! Im sure this will do very well in the contest. Goodluck
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