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Sunset Radiance

Serenity pervades amidst sunset radiance Subduing pressure-gripped day’s torturous gloom Setting good night sleep for tomorrow’s faith-bloom Sweet respite from vexing worldly flamboyance… Spirit of mine seeks* God for strength’s solace Sails toward His shelter, haven for the hopeless... Serenity pervades midst sunset radiance.
*Psalm 105:4 Seek the LORD, and his strength: seek his face evermore. October 7, 2019 Rhyme with alliteration Honorable Mention, "STRAND CHOICE 10,any form,any theme" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 1/30/2020.

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Date: 1/31/2020 12:37:00 AM
Love the allieration! Congratulations. Also love your faith based reminders for life.
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Date: 10/7/2019 3:45:00 PM
Fine write Beata, keeping true to the scriptures. Have a blessed day,Blessings ,Gordon
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Date: 10/7/2019 11:07:00 AM
HIi Beata: Your poem pervades among the sheen of the sun!
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Date: 10/7/2019 5:18:00 AM
My favorite line: Setting good night sleep for tomorrow’s faith-bloom
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