Beata Agustin Poet Rhyme

Sunset Radiance

Serenity pervades amidst sunset radiance

Subduing pressure-gripped day’s torturous gloom

Setting good night sleep for tomorrow’s faith-bloom

Sweet respite from vexing worldly flamboyance…

Spirit of mine seeks* God for strength’s solace

Sails toward His shelter, haven for the hopeless...

Serenity pervades midst sunset radiance. 

*Psalm 105:4 Seek the LORD, and his strength: seek his face evermore.

October 7, 2019

Rhyme with alliteration
Honorable Mention, "STRAND CHOICE 10,any form,any theme" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 1/30/2020.

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Sam Kauffman January 31, 2020 at 12:37 AM Love the allieration! Congratulations. Also love your faith based reminders for life.

Gordon Mcconnell October 7, 2019 at 3:45 PM Fine write Beata, keeping true to the scriptures. Have a blessed day,Blessings ,Gordon

Ralph Sergi October 7, 2019 at 11:07 AM HIi Beata: Your poem pervades among the sheen of the sun!

Kim Rodrigues October 7, 2019 at 5:18 AM My favorite line: Setting good night sleep for tomorrow’s faith-bloom