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Sunset on Galway Bay (Haiku No. 34)

Explosion of light Pooled the bay with reds and gold Catching fishermen.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/19/2011 8:53:00 PM
Coming back to this one. I gotta fav it!
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Date: 1/7/2011 8:35:00 AM
wow, great HAIKU!!! Love that last line!
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Date: 12/15/2010 2:07:00 PM
Hi. Haiku just drip from your pen especially with this atmospheric picture of Galway Bay. Eamon
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Date: 7/1/2010 11:01:00 AM
This is excellent. I like the fascination of the imagery. The irony in the end, regarding the catching, is very interesting. Galway Bay appears like a beautiful place. Please drop me a line soon! Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/14/2010 8:49:00 AM
This is just awesome! I can see the imagery quite clearly. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/12/2010 9:20:00 PM
like a painting!
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Date: 5/17/2010 2:42:00 PM
Long time no hear! Your input is missed. If you get a chance can you read & comment on Part 1 When Madness Rides on Moonlight & Part 2? As one of my favorite poets I would really appreciate that! Light & Love (most excellent cutting line..line 2 & juxstaposition in line 3)
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Date: 4/6/2010 12:40:00 AM
Great imagery in L1/2 Deirdre.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & kind words today
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Date: 3/10/2010 12:06:00 AM
I have seen what you describe!
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Date: 3/9/2010 6:50:00 AM
A joy to read your poetry today Deirdre. Wishing you the best with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2010 7:38:00 AM
I can picture this tapestry of beauty..lovely..Charma:)
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Date: 3/8/2010 7:37:00 AM
Beautiful..... Fishing is as well... Very therapeutic.......:JP]
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