Sunset of My Life: Part-II
tears rolling down and into my mouth
and face turning red with fear
lips began to quiver
as the cloud of thoughts covered me
the scene in front of my eyes was not unsettling
but certainly a beautiful sunset
yet i felt like a part of me was going down
that was when i could no longer change the fate
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