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Sunset of Love

"Waves are calm as the day is ending. wings fly overhead so carefree. a beautiful sunset the sky is sending. two hearts for each other is all they wish to see. A sunset of love brings out passion & fire. their surroundings they fully seem to ignore. eyes that smile with such dangerous desire. as the sun starts setting down more. The waves are still calm as the wings have flown their own way. hand in hand they also leave the sunset behind. tomorrow will bring another beautiful day. as the sunset of love will bring a lot more hearts to find" 3/24/2018-#3

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Date: 4/11/2018 9:36:00 PM
Well done, Patti. Congrats on your podium finish.
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Date: 4/2/2018 10:45:00 PM
'Worth a thousand words', of a picture it is said, but in picturesque verse, it's butter for bettering the bread. Lovely, Patti. :) Congrats! ~ Artsie
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Date: 4/1/2018 10:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed this interpretation of the pic.
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Date: 4/1/2018 9:44:00 AM
Patti, I enjoyed your beautiful, romantic poem. Congrats on your win. John
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Date: 4/1/2018 9:04:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Patti! :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 8:34:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Patti :) - Enjoy the last days of Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 8:04:00 AM
Lovely penning Patti! So romantic :) Congratulations on your win! xomo
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Date: 4/1/2018 7:37:00 AM
Beautiful romantic write Patti..Congrats on your win..
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