Sunset of Love

"Waves are calm as the day is ending.
    wings fly overhead so carefree.
a beautiful sunset the sky is sending.
 two hearts for each other is all they
                  wish to see.
A sunset of love brings out passion &
                        fire.
their surroundings they fully seem to
                      ignore.
eyes that smile with such dangerous
                      desire.
as the sun starts setting down more.
The waves are still calm as the wings
         have flown their own way.
hand in hand they also leave the sunset
                      behind.
tomorrow will bring another beautiful day.
as the sunset of love will bring a lot more
                  hearts to find"

3/24/2018-#3
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 9:36 PM
Well done, Patti. Congrats on your podium finish.
Donnelly Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 10:45 PM
'Worth a thousand words', of a picture it is said, but in picturesque verse, it's butter for bettering the bread. Lovely, Patti. :) Congrats! ~ Artsie
Gentry Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 10:29 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed this interpretation of the pic.
Gondolf Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 9:44 AM
Patti, I enjoyed your beautiful, romantic poem. Congrats on your win. John
Sands Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 9:04 AM
Congratulations for your win Patti! :)
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 8:34 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Patti :) - Enjoy the last days of Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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April 1, 2018 at 8:04 AM
Lovely penning Patti! So romantic :) Congratulations on your win! xomo
May Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Beautiful romantic write Patti..Congrats on your win..
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