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Sunset Lullaby

Upon leaves of gold, orange and brunette, I lay with backpack as my pillow asset. As air touches me, smooth as any duvet, cascading songs sing from a drowsy sunset:
Mountain sleep-persuasion strong sways treetops in cradlesong. Lay down contents of your daylong - wake the morn to sweet birdsong. Rest in mountain’s majestic lure, in pure sunset breezes demure touchingly tucking you secure while stars twinkle sleeps allure. Rest as night sounds of content wrap you in natures melodic intent. Trees give loft to cares ascent as sunset grabs peace’s descent. Rest easy under night’s canopy vocalized in sunset’s rhapsody, and trilled in twilight’s pageantry, to bring dreams of prime fantasy. Sleep sweet in sunset’s essence under the galaxy’s guard presence. Feel sunset’s alluring radiance rock you soft thru night’s cadence. Mountain sleep-persuasion strong sways treetops in cradlesong. Lay down contents of your daylong - wake the morn to sweet birdsong.
... CayCay March 24, 2018

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Date: 4/9/2018 1:19:00 AM
Congratulations, CayCay on your great win with such a lovely poem.
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Date: 4/8/2018 10:19:00 PM
Absolutely lovely, CayCay. Congrats on your most deserved win.
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Date: 4/5/2018 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely lullaby!
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Date: 4/4/2018 11:31:00 PM
WOO HOO, you did it, girlfriend. AN AWESOME and well deserved WIN at the top!! Congratulations to you!!
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Date: 4/4/2018 9:23:00 PM
Excellent write , CayCay, great imagery and rhyme...Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/4/2018 6:57:00 PM
Such a beautiful, soothing and well-written, Lyric, CayCay. It flows so well, and I love the Monorhymes too! Congratulations on your fine podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/4/2018 3:15:00 PM
Congratulations for your win CayCay! :)
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Date: 3/26/2018 2:30:00 PM
CayCay, this is so relaxing and restful, you just described the place I want to be right now. Best of luck in the contest. John
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/26/2018 8:24:00 PM
Oh, John, I want to be there, too! Maybe we should arrange a Soup camp out ... I wrote this thinking of the mountains in Pennsylvania, but we won't even consider the logistics. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 3/25/2018 5:20:00 PM
enthralling me with your dulcet melody, cay... with a free-flowing rhyme that is not forced, i'll take this sunset hushaby with me tonight!... huggs
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/26/2018 8:24:00 PM
I love your comments, they warmed me, plus the reminder of the word 'hushaby' was very soothing. Thank you, Nette. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 3/24/2018 5:37:00 PM
What a beautiful lullaby, CayCay! Enjoyable content and captivating rhyme to go with it. Your sunsets make life worth living for! Regards // paul
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/24/2018 7:24:00 PM
I love your comments, Paul. Thank you so much for sharing your 'poem reaction' with me. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 3/24/2018 4:06:00 PM
This was beautiful and enchanting. The title drew me in and the poem gave me goosebumps
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/24/2018 7:23:00 PM
I wrote a thank you to you earlier in this same box - but, where did it go? It's a mystery. I'm happy to have drawn you in and really enjoyed your comments. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 3/24/2018 10:42:00 AM
wow, you did beautifully with this theme,Caycay. It's one I have yet to try and I need to really get a move-on. A winner in MY book. So melodic and soothing. I have 20 min and will go to Salt Lake then for my movie. Catch ya later, girlfriend.
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Date: 3/24/2018 9:30:00 AM
CayCay, are truly gifted! This is a beautifully written poem which captures the ongoing canvas of nature’s brush. Loved it!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/24/2018 4:58:00 PM
What a gift your words are to me and my muse. I value knowing I moved someone and it certainly validates the lifelong urge to write poetry. Thank you very much, Nancy. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 3/24/2018 9:05:00 AM
I love the feelings of beautiful nature you display in this gorgeously written poem, CayCay.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/24/2018 5:00:00 PM
I love your comment and I love camping on mountains in early autumn so I shut my eyes and remembered. Good to see you, and please accept my thanks, Caren. Later tonight, I may come a'visitin'. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 3/24/2018 8:56:00 AM
Beautiful CayCay. Good luck in the contest :)
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/24/2018 7:22:00 PM
Hi, Heidi - thank you so much for your 'beautiful' comment, it means much! All the best to you ... CayCay

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