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Sunset Lake

On the pier, looking out, The lake is waving all about. The sun is setting, Pink and orange colors, the lake is getting. I watch the colors glistening, It's time! Are you listening? The sun just touched the lake, Did you hear the sizzle that it makes? Watching the final colors slowly fade away, A peaceful ending to a busy day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/21/2010 10:10:00 AM
I love the images and cheery tone- lovely poem Amy! :)
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Date: 8/13/2010 6:39:00 PM
Nice rhyme and the words bring beauty to your sunset* lv~ SAT
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