Sunset Lake

On the pier, looking out,
The lake is waving all about.
The sun is setting,
Pink and orange colors, the lake is getting.
I watch the colors glistening,
It's time! Are you listening?
The sun just touched the lake,
Did you hear the sizzle that it makes?
Watching the final colors slowly fade away,
A peaceful ending to a busy day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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La Puma Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 10:10 AM
I love the images and cheery tone- lovely poem Amy! :)
A  Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 6:39 PM
Nice rhyme and the words bring beauty to your sunset* lv~ SAT
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