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Sunset In Xanadu

Alluring Brightness Connects Darkened Earth: Fully, Gravity Heeds Illumination’s Jihad… Kilometers Lengthen, Mankind Notices Observable Places, Quarks, Rotations; Sunsets Thrill, United Valiantly; Watching Xanadu’s Yellow Zeniths. © October 30, 2011 Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: Nature’s Bounty ABC Form Sponsored by: john freeman

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Date: 11/8/2011 5:36:00 PM
Congrats on your winning entry.Sara
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Date: 11/8/2011 8:00:00 AM
congradulations on your first place win. i know the thrill.
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/8/2011 2:44:00 PM
Thank you for reading and sending congratulations. Smiles.
Date: 11/7/2011 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Moses' sponsored contest "Natures Bounty" Dane Ann. Love, Carol
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/8/2011 2:45:00 PM
Thank you for reading and sending congratulations. Smiles.
Date: 11/6/2011 10:07:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on a superb win for this extraordinary entry luv..
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/6/2011 10:26:00 PM
Thank you. Smiles, Dane Ann
Date: 11/6/2011 7:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this excellent work...Margaret
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/6/2011 10:26:00 PM
Thank you. Smiles, Dane Ann
Date: 11/6/2011 6:20:00 PM
Beautiful, job, Dane, I knew you hadn't forgotten you ABC's Congraulations on those beautiful connections in your worthy first. Agape, Moses
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/6/2011 10:25:00 PM
Thank you for your 1st place judgment. I enjoyed writing for your contest. Agape, Dane Ann
Date: 11/4/2011 5:58:00 PM
Good luck in John's ABC contest..Great choice of words..Not so easy a form is it..Reads like a winner to me.Sara
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Date: 10/30/2011 10:27:00 PM
oh, I was going to use Xanadu but changed to a flower word instead. Good job with this one!
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