Heidi Sands Poet Haiku

Sunset Haiku

4 - Sunset Haiku -  


              water is golden
   swirling currents of bright light
           the sun heads to dip

          red, pink and orange
        take over horizon skies
            colorful day’s end
  
             lavender and blue
  blend above the dark mountains
             pallet of night fall

             there is a fireball
  bursting through the cloud cover
            sun’s grand finale


Heidi Sands

5/21/21

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Akkina Downing May 24, 2021 at 5:37 AM A breathtaking sunset. Excellent haiku my beautiful poetess... Heidi Sands May 24, 2021 at 5:10 PM Hi Akkina. So nice to see you. Thank you very much. I hope all is well. Have a nice evening :)

Panagiota Romios May 22, 2021 at 1:00 PM Grand haikus... Pangie xx Heidi Sands May 22, 2021 at 1:25 PM Thank you Pangie. I hope you are having a nice weekend :)

Demetrios Trifiatis May 22, 2021 at 5:44 AM Masterpieces painted by the sun's wondrous pallet with the help of your stunning pen, my dearest friend, Heidi. Hugs xxx Heidi Sands May 22, 2021 at 6:21 AM Thank you for your kind comment today, Demetrios. I appreciate it very much. Hugs :)

Joseph May May 21, 2021 at 8:17 PM I love the last one of these beautiful haiku Heidi, hugs Heidi Sands May 22, 2021 at 5:03 AM Thank you Joseph. I am happy to hear that. Hugs :)

Honestly J.T. May 21, 2021 at 2:25 PM Cool poem; I like the read -JT Heidi Sands May 21, 2021 at 4:56 PM Thank you JT. I am happy you enjoyed it. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu May 21, 2021 at 12:32 PM Hello Heidi, sunset are beautiful. I like it best over the water. Hugs Darlene. Darlene De Beaulieu May 21, 2021 at 4:01 PM Hello Heidi, i can stare at them for hours. Hugs Darlene Heidi Sands May 21, 2021 at 1:04 PM Hi Darlene. Yes, they are beautiful to watch. I enjoy them over the water too. Thank you for your comment on this. Hugs :)

Vijay Pandit May 21, 2021 at 10:40 AM Beautiful hues of sunset, Heidi. Your linked haiku poems cheer the evening wonderfully. Heidi Sands May 21, 2021 at 11:00 AM Thank you Vijay. More than one had come to me at once and then, when I couldn't decide, I just put them all in. I appreciate your kind, happy comment :)

Carolyn Devonshire May 21, 2021 at 8:33 AM The sunset you describe is much like the vividly-colored ones we have here, except for the mountains. Beautifully penned, Heidi. Key West holds a Sundown Celebration every night. If this is for a contest, best wishes for a win. Hugs, Carolyn Heidi Sands May 21, 2021 at 9:20 AM Thank you very much Carolyn. Sundown celebration sounds fun. No, this isn't for a contest. I just went to sleep lastnight with some lines to haiku coming to mind and have seen some sunsets lately. I hope all is well for you :)

Tom Cunningham May 21, 2021 at 7:05 AM Stunning images Heidi, saw all those last year in Turkey. Hope you have a lovely weekend, cold and rain here. Tom Heidi Sands May 21, 2021 at 7:18 AM Thank you Tom. I am sorry to hear you have cold and rain there. I hope you have a lovely weekend too and the weather gets better for you :)