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Sunset Haiku

4 - Sunset Haiku - water is golden swirling currents of bright light the sun heads to dip red, pink and orange take over horizon skies colorful day’s end lavender and blue blend above the dark mountains pallet of night fall there is a fireball bursting through the cloud cover sun’s grand finale Heidi Sands 5/21/21

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Akkina Downing

Date: 5/24/2021 5:37:00 AM

A breathtaking sunset. Excellent haiku my beautiful poetess...

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/24/2021 5:10:00 PM

Hi Akkina. So nice to see you. Thank you very much. I hope all is well. Have a nice evening :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/22/2021 1:00:00 PM

Grand haikus... Pangie xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/22/2021 1:25:00 PM

Thank you Pangie. I hope you are having a nice weekend :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/22/2021 5:44:00 AM

Masterpieces painted by the sun's wondrous pallet with the help of your stunning pen, my dearest friend, Heidi. Hugs xxx

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/22/2021 6:21:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comment today, Demetrios. I appreciate it very much. Hugs :)

Joseph May

Date: 5/21/2021 8:17:00 PM

I love the last one of these beautiful haiku Heidi, hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/22/2021 5:03:00 AM

Thank you Joseph. I am happy to hear that. Hugs :)

Honestly J.T.

Date: 5/21/2021 2:25:00 PM

Cool poem; I like the read -JT

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/21/2021 4:56:00 PM

Thank you JT. I am happy you enjoyed it. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/21/2021 12:32:00 PM

Hello Heidi, sunset are beautiful. I like it best over the water. Hugs Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/21/2021 4:01:00 PM

Hello Heidi, i can stare at them for hours. Hugs Darlene

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/21/2021 1:04:00 PM

Hi Darlene. Yes, they are beautiful to watch. I enjoy them over the water too. Thank you for your comment on this. Hugs :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/21/2021 10:40:00 AM

Beautiful hues of sunset, Heidi. Your linked haiku poems cheer the evening wonderfully.

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/21/2021 11:00:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. More than one had come to me at once and then, when I couldn't decide, I just put them all in. I appreciate your kind, happy comment :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/21/2021 8:33:00 AM

The sunset you describe is much like the vividly-colored ones we have here, except for the mountains. Beautifully penned, Heidi. Key West holds a Sundown Celebration every night. If this is for a contest, best wishes for a win. Hugs, Carolyn

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/21/2021 9:20:00 AM

Thank you very much Carolyn. Sundown celebration sounds fun. No, this isn't for a contest. I just went to sleep lastnight with some lines to haiku coming to mind and have seen some sunsets lately. I hope all is well for you :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/21/2021 7:05:00 AM

Stunning images Heidi, saw all those last year in Turkey. Hope you have a lovely weekend, cold and rain here. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/21/2021 7:18:00 AM

Thank you Tom. I am sorry to hear you have cold and rain there. I hope you have a lovely weekend too and the weather gets better for you :)