Sunset Flights

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Light recedes at sunset and night starts to assemble. No longer bright, Sol slowly sinks, as bats take flight amidst the shadows and soon fly from sight, blending with the dark. (Rhyme) 10/30/2021 Something Beautiful 5 line rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Edward Ebbs

Date: 11/11/2021 4:13:00 PM

Nice Job! I like this, congrats! Ed

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/12/2021 7:34:00 AM

Thanks, Edward, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Charles Messina

Date: 11/11/2021 3:45:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful poetry, Emile. How you can take something that to me is so ugly (lol), and make it sound so lovely is truly a gift. And you are gifted for sure. Congratulations on your win my friend! All the best, Charlie

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/12/2021 7:31:00 AM

Thanks, Charles, you honor me my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/30/2021 11:41:00 AM

So well-written, Emile. I loved your rhymes and the overall sense of flight in the design of your poem. Lovely. Best of luck in the contest.

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/30/2021 12:37:00 PM

Thanks, Milt, as always your comments are most appreciated my friend, Emile.