Emile Pinet Poet Rhyme

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Sunset Flights

Light recedes at sunset
and night starts to assemble.
No longer bright, Sol slowly sinks,
as bats take flight amidst the shadows
and soon fly from sight, blending with the dark.


(Rhyme)


10/30/2021


Something Beautiful 5 line rhyme Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Edward Ebbs November 11, 2021 at 4:13 PM Nice Job! I like this, congrats! Ed Emile Pinet November 12, 2021 at 7:34 AM Thanks, Edward, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Charles Messina November 11, 2021 at 3:45 PM Absolutely beautiful poetry, Emile. How you can take something that to me is so ugly (lol), and make it sound so lovely is truly a gift. And you are gifted for sure. Congratulations on your win my friend! All the best, Charlie Emile Pinet November 12, 2021 at 7:31 AM Thanks, Charles, you honor me my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins October 30, 2021 at 11:41 AM So well-written, Emile. I loved your rhymes and the overall sense of flight in the design of your poem. Lovely. Best of luck in the contest. Emile Pinet October 30, 2021 at 12:37 PM Thanks, Milt, as always your comments are most appreciated my friend, Emile.