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Sunset Dance

The last Autumn breeze ¬ Captures two skeletal trees ~~ In sunset dance please ¬ http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-11.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/30/2010 10:05:00 PM
Just had to see one more. Where is the leaf one. Is this it? This one is cute.
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Date: 8/28/2010 3:58:00 PM
Very nice Haiku, James! Beautiful imagery. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 8/28/2010 12:56:00 PM
Nice use of imagery for a glimpse of the upcoming season. Interesting perspective. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 8/28/2010 9:10:00 AM
Great scene you captured here. Really enjoyed this! Emily
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Date: 8/28/2010 8:33:00 AM
Nice write, James. Good use of the form. Dan C
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Date: 8/28/2010 8:29:00 AM
The sunset dance capturing the last leaves on skeletal trees -- VERY, VERY creative image, James. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/28/2010 8:05:00 AM
Wow James, make that a double! Love the idea of the dance, can visualize it.. Hope you are enjoying your weekend :) Wilma
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Date: 8/28/2010 7:51:00 AM
Super James, not only did you write an awesome Haiku you made the image rhyme so neatly. Enjoyed your poem this wonderful morning,..p.d.
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Date: 8/28/2010 7:48:00 AM
I trully enjoyed this one..I can see the scene..Not quite Autumn here as of today but it is on its way..Sara
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Date: 8/28/2010 7:46:00 AM
Excellent my friend, what a perfect picture you give the reader here.. Michael
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