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Sunset Dance


The last Autumn breeze ¬
Captures two skeletal trees ~~
In sunset dance please ¬






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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2010 10:05:00 PM

Just had to see one more. Where is the leaf one. Is this it? This one is cute.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 8/28/2010 3:58:00 PM

Very nice Haiku, James! Beautiful imagery. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

Date: 8/28/2010 12:56:00 PM

Nice use of imagery for a glimpse of the upcoming season. Interesting perspective. Keep on writing! Karen

De R

Date: 8/28/2010 9:10:00 AM

Great scene you captured here. Really enjoyed this! Emily

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 8/28/2010 8:33:00 AM

Nice write, James. Good use of the form. Dan C

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/28/2010 8:29:00 AM

The sunset dance capturing the last leaves on skeletal trees -- VERY, VERY creative image, James. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/28/2010 8:05:00 AM

Wow James, make that a double! Love the idea of the dance, can visualize it.. Hope you are enjoying your weekend :) Wilma

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/28/2010 7:51:00 AM

Super James, not only did you write an awesome Haiku you made the image rhyme so neatly. Enjoyed your poem this wonderful morning,..p.d.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/28/2010 7:48:00 AM

I trully enjoyed this one..I can see the scene..Not quite Autumn here as of today but it is on its way..Sara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/28/2010 7:46:00 AM

Excellent my friend, what a perfect picture you give the reader here.. Michael

Sunset Dance

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