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Sunset Couplet

Sharing the beauty of the passage of time U N Slowing down to clear your mind E T “Kim’s Acrostic Play Contest” Dated: 11.11.2020

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Date: 12/2/2020 1:01:00 PM

Carol, sending you congratulations on your winning couplet! The use of "s" is like a slow exhale "slowing down!" Well done. All the besssst!

Carol Mitra
Date: 12/2/2020 5:56:00 PM

Thanks Sam....true Sam a slow exhale :)

Date: 11/25/2020 2:40:00 PM

Congratulations, Carol, on your win for your lovely couplet on sunset!!

Carol Mitra
Date: 11/25/2020 6:30:00 PM

Thanks Newton.....A Sunset is indeed beautiful :)

Date: 11/25/2020 7:26:00 AM

Hi Carol, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a Happy Thanksgiving:-) Alexis

Carol Mitra
Date: 11/25/2020 7:46:00 AM

Thanks Alexis.....same to you, much appreciated.

Date: 11/25/2020 6:38:00 AM

Congrats on second place, Carol! A lovely sunset!

Carol Mitra
Date: 11/25/2020 7:12:00 AM

Thanks Kim.....sure is dear :)

Date: 11/13/2020 5:56:00 AM

This is well-done, Carol!! The chosen word well-matches with the poetic lines!! Good Luck in the contest!!

Carol Mitra
Date: 11/13/2020 8:22:00 AM

Thanks Newton....much appreciated.