Sunset Couplet

Sharing the beauty of the passage of time
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Slowing down to clear your mind
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“Kim’s Acrostic Play Contest”
Dated: 11.11.2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kauffman Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 1:01 PM
Carol, sending you congratulations on your winning couplet! The use of "s" is like a slow exhale "slowing down!" Well done. All the besssst!
Mitra Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 5:56 PM
Thanks Sam....true Sam a slow exhale :)
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 2:40 PM
Congratulations, Carol, on your win for your lovely couplet on sunset!!
Mitra Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 6:30 PM
Thanks Newton.....A Sunset is indeed beautiful :)
Y. Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 7:26 AM
Hi Carol, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a Happy Thanksgiving:-) Alexis
Mitra Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 7:46 AM
Thanks Alexis.....same to you, much appreciated.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 6:38 AM
Congrats on second place, Carol! A lovely sunset!
Mitra Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 7:12 AM
Thanks Kim.....sure is dear :)
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 5:56 AM
This is well-done, Carol!! The chosen word well-matches with the poetic lines!! Good Luck in the contest!!
Mitra Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 8:22 AM
Thanks Newton....much appreciated.
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