Mary Taylor Poet Pantoum

Sunset Car Ride

Sunset car rides are my favorite
The wind in my fur makes me feel free
This time with my boy, I savor it
How much better could life ever be?

The wind in my fur makes me feel free
Tongues' out, tail wags, a smile on my face
How much better could life ever be?
Are we going back to that fun place?

Tongues' out, tail wags, a smile on my face
I don't care which direction we go
Are we going back to that fun place?
Can we take our time and get there slow?

I don't care which direction we go
This time with my boy, I savor it
Can we take our time and get there slow?
Sunset car rides are my favorite.
5/19/2020
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Eve Roper June 14, 2020 at 4:35 PM Sunset Car Ride, was enjoyable read, Mary, perfect rhyme and flow. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison May 20, 2020 at 7:08 AM fabulous personification in this sweet poem, good luck in the contest Mary:-) hugs Jan xx