Sunset At Sea--Footle

Divine
         skyline




© kash poet
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Placement: 1st; (Nov.2011)

Contest:SUCCINCT a single two line verse

Sponsor:Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Loving Iii Avatar
December 3, 2011 at 7:06 PM
lucky you. john
Puddifoot Avatar
December 3, 2011 at 5:02 PM
two words conjuring up beauty...congrats on your 1st place win :-)
K. Avatar
December 3, 2011 at 11:29 AM
You sure got the hang of these footles, kash! :) and I see you won, so congrats!
Merryman Avatar
December 2, 2011 at 10:19 PM
Congrats on this winning entry, Kash. Kim
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2011 at 9:18 PM
Hey Kash, are you ok, my friend? I think it's been more than a day and I've not seen you around!
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 7:06 PM
Congratulations on your first place win with this amazing write! Lori
Aul Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 2:48 PM
Congrats too on your win......George
Brown Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 5:23 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Succinct" contest Kash. Love, Carol
Dufresne Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 5:22 AM
a fulfilled footle! Congratulations to you Kash on your fine win.
Onclaud Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 12:25 AM
yeah, kashi... cheers to you! a unique write:) huggs!
Dietrich Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 9:32 PM
WAY to GO, another big win on this teeny weeny footle!! It rocks, Kash.
. Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 9:30 PM
cOnGrAtS indeed! the Divine part is simply beautiful, the sky part is true but then you add the line, made it simply... perfect
Wesley Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 8:08 PM
Amazing - twewo words that say so much. Congrats Kashi!
Wesley Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 8:09 PM
the word is two, I have a spastic finger
J.T. Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 6:19 PM
Congrats on 1st place- JH
Song Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 3:08 PM
Footles about the master's hand are always a winner. Congrats to you and this powerful succinct write, Kash. Gwendoeln
Johnson Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 1:40 PM
Fine twoline Congratulations. Joyce
Horne Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 12:44 PM
Lovely footle, Kash, and many congrats to you too : )
Freeman Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 12:42 PM
Way to go Kash, nice to see your poem rate first place, Congratulations on your worthy poem. Agape, Moses
Devonshire Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 11:19 AM
Oh yes, this is a perfect footle with an upbeat, spiritual image, Kash. If this is for Brian's contest, he's going to love it too! Love, Carolyn
Song Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 2:13 AM
Better than a Cincinnati skyline or a New York City skyline ANY DAY, Kash. You are a masterful painter with so few words. Hope u are doing welll! Gwendolen
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 11:16 PM
Hey, this is magnificent footling, Kash. I hope it does really well in the little contest. It's for Brian, right? I went two hours past my limit tonight. I am going to get off very soon. Nice seeing you have this new one up. LUv, Andrea
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