Sunset At Dawn

Why this gentle breeze ravages my soul
Why this moonlit night sets my heart on fire
Why this sweet fragrance renders my wits helter-skelter,
Why my quest for love binds me to a forlorn fate?


~ A Brian strand 3 to14 line contest.
~03/24/19
~Contest: Challenge 5, 4 lines
~Sponsor: Dear Heart
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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 10:57 AM
Abdul, my compliments on Brian's win with your quizzical poignant verse my friend, Aloha!
Mandani Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 3:13 PM
Appreciate much. Thanks
Alex Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 10:33 AM
Great Questions. Grand Write.
Mandani Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 3:14 PM
Thanks a lot.
Andresen Avatar
March 27, 2019 at 2:17 PM
- A great poem for this writing challenge ... congratulations, Abdul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mandani Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 6:06 PM
Thanks with a Smile:)
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