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Sunset At Dawn

Why this gentle breeze ravages my soul Why this moonlit night sets my heart on fire Why this sweet fragrance renders my wits helter-skelter, Why my quest for love binds me to a forlorn fate? ~ A Brian strand 3 to14 line contest. ~03/24/19 ~Contest: Challenge 5, 4 lines ~Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Date: 8/21/2021 10:57:00 AM
Abdul, my compliments on Brian's win with your quizzical poignant verse my friend, Aloha!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 8/21/2021 3:13:00 PM
Appreciate much. Thanks
Date: 8/21/2021 10:33:00 AM
Great Questions. Grand Write.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 8/21/2021 3:14:00 PM
Thanks a lot.
Date: 3/29/2019 5:54:00 PM
Abdul, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderfully and sad piece ~
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Abdul Malik
Date: 3/29/2019 6:05:00 PM
Thanks a lot.
Date: 3/27/2019 2:17:00 PM
- A great poem for this writing challenge ... congratulations, Abdul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Abdul Malik
Date: 3/29/2019 6:06:00 PM
Thanks with a Smile:)

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