Sunset

Sunset

Liquid gold...molten in the water's sluggish hues 
    of blazing embers. 



1.7.2017©deborah burch 

Form: Monoku

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David William Breidenthal

January 11, 2017 at 11:49 PM

Brilliant monoku! :) Beautifully written -JWE

Deborah Burch

January 12, 2017 at 11:19 AM

Thank you JW!! :)

John Beam

January 10, 2017 at 2:51 PM

Very nice, Deb. I like Monokus and all the coo's:) It is fun, trying to get all that beauty, in a few words

Deborah Burch

January 10, 2017 at 3:08 PM

Thanks John!!! Thank you for your visit!! Big Hugggs!! Deb

Lim'Rik Flats

January 9, 2017 at 8:28 AM

I'll take two please! And a side of fries... ;-). beautiful ~ john

Deborah Burch

January 9, 2017 at 10:22 AM

Lol!! Thank you john!!! Biggest Hugggs!! ;)

Daniel Turner

January 8, 2017 at 10:20 PM

Ah, so beautifully poetic, Deb:)

Deborah Burch

January 9, 2017 at 10:23 AM

Thank you Daniel. Big Hugggs. Deb:)

Andrea Dietrich

January 8, 2017 at 5:42 PM

How gorgeous!!

Deborah Burch

January 8, 2017 at 9:39 PM

Thanks Andy!!!:)

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