Pashang Salehi Poet Rhyme

Sunset

 Sunset...

Sunset...


The breeze at sunset is lovely, divine.
   The Drunken Swallows are flying in wine.
Who else is flying? With me in colors!
   Hoping no one else ever discovers.
My wings are aging, painful, and tired.
   Colors of sunset are much more desired.
We become part of infinite wisdom.
   It doesn’t matter the ultimate kingdom.
I am wondering what is in heaven,
   Sunset or sunrise, which has been given?
Everything circles, a circle is hollow.
   If you are flying, fly with a swallow.


12/2015 Haloo

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Old Buck October 27, 2017 at 4:12 PM Pashang: I enjoyed this. This is so descriptive and covers so many topics at once. Well done. Keep them coming and thanks for sharing them with all of us on the soup. oldbuck Pashang Salehi October 27, 2017 at 11:13 PM Thank you my friend...

Robert Nehls February 13, 2016 at 6:08 PM Hi Pashang. Very descriptive, insightful and full of imagery. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing..... Robert. Pashang Salehi February 14, 2016 at 8:52 AM You are always welcome..

Sara Kendrick February 1, 2016 at 4:58 PM Enjoyed reading this one..Very descriptive of a beautiful sunset..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Pashang Salehi February 2, 2016 at 12:48 AM Thank you Sara, same to you.... you're always welcome here.

Don Johnson January 30, 2016 at 2:43 AM Great poetry here old mate, written well just forst rate... i find.. Pashang Salehi February 2, 2016 at 12:49 AM Thanks mate stop by anytime ............

Poet Destroyer A January 8, 2016 at 11:44 PM Pashang, Congratulations on your -SUNSET- win..... Love LINDA Pashang Salehi January 12, 2016 at 11:41 PM Than you Linda for reading my work. You're so kind.

Jan Allison January 1, 2016 at 11:31 AM Very beautifully penned Pashang congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Pashang Salehi January 2, 2016 at 1:07 AM Thanks Jan... Happy new year

Richard Lamoureux January 1, 2016 at 10:54 AM Congratulations and Happy New Year! Pashang Salehi January 2, 2016 at 1:08 AM Thanks Richard, Happy New Year.

Skat A January 1, 2016 at 10:19 AM Pashang, Congratulations on your SUNSET win. Thank you for all the time you took supporting and entering my contest this past year 2015:-) I really enjoyed every entry. Please don't be upset if you are sharing a placement or did not make the top 10. I feel every poem, should have been placed higher. Stop by my latest Blog "On the first day of January - Next To Me" when you'd like or have time. Celebrate your win on the first day of January.... Have A Blessed Year. Love SKAT Pashang Salehi January 2, 2016 at 1:07 AM Thank you SKAT for considering my work. Happy new year.

Poet Destroyer A December 30, 2015 at 12:19 PM i love it... hope to see it in the sunset contest... linda Pashang Salehi December 30, 2015 at 12:27 PM Thank you Linda, this got rejected because it was not an old poem. Happy new year.