Notes About The Poem

A mere is the poetic term for a lake.

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Sunset

the sky looks on fire

mere cutting through the middle

pivoting rays

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Haiku with 6/7/4 equaling the
correct number of 17 syllables.

11/16/2015

Contest - Sunset

Sponsor - Nayda Ivette Negron

3rd place win
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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