Sunset

Drowsy rays court night Shy sky blushes then flashes God’s canvas is set! © Demetrios Trifiatis 16 August 2015

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Marion Mwangi

Date: 9/3/2015 8:30:00 AM

Gods canvas is set

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/3/2015 9:09:00 AM

Thank you, Marion!

Marion Mwangi
Date: 9/3/2015 8:31:00 AM

i love this short poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/18/2015 3:40:00 AM

- After a whole week with smiles, memories and tears - (empty the house after my parents) - I enjoy this beautiful poem, dear friend Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/16/2015 6:50:00 PM

I echo my friends "Beautiful"!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/17/2015 5:05:00 AM

Well, thank you too for the same reason, my friend, Richard!

Tim Smith

Date: 8/16/2015 4:05:00 PM

A beautiful way to describe the sunset.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/17/2015 5:04:00 AM

It is so much better to see it! I have posted two pictures in FB of yesterday's sunset! Thank you for your visit and comment, my friend Tim!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2015 10:55:00 AM

so beautiful. Keep them coming and thanks for the anniversary wishes. But don't wish for the last half to be as good as the first. I need it to be better. hahaha!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/17/2015 5:10:00 AM

Well, since I do not know how the first half was I could only wish the second half " to be at least as happy as the first one'' in that way I leave room for improvement, Dear Andrea. Anyway, now you are wiser so you will be happier! Thank you for visiting!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/16/2015 7:38:00 AM

the imagery is simply delightful Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/17/2015 5:02:00 AM

Thank you ,Jan. Your comment I appreciate!