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Sunset

Drowsy rays court night

Shy sky blushes then flashes 
 
God’s canvas is set!




© Demetrios Trifiatis
    16 August 2015

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Marion Mwangi

September 3, 2015 at 8:30 AM

Gods canvas is set

Demetrios Trifiatis

September 3, 2015 at 9:09 AM

Thank you, Marion!

Marion Mwangi

September 3, 2015 at 8:31 AM

i love this short poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 18, 2015 at 3:40 AM

- After a whole week with smiles, memories and tears - (empty the house after my parents) - I enjoy this beautiful poem, dear friend Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

August 16, 2015 at 6:50 PM

I echo my friends "Beautiful"!

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 17, 2015 at 5:05 AM

Well, thank you too for the same reason, my friend, Richard!

Tim Smith

August 16, 2015 at 4:05 PM

A beautiful way to describe the sunset.

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 17, 2015 at 5:04 AM

It is so much better to see it! I have posted two pictures in FB of yesterday's sunset! Thank you for your visit and comment, my friend Tim!

Andrea Dietrich

August 16, 2015 at 10:55 AM

so beautiful. Keep them coming and thanks for the anniversary wishes. But don't wish for the last half to be as good as the first. I need it to be better. hahaha!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 17, 2015 at 5:10 AM

Well, since I do not know how the first half was I could only wish the second half " to be at least as happy as the first one'' in that way I leave room for improvement, Dear Andrea. Anyway, now you are wiser so you will be happier! Thank you for visiting!