Sunset

mountains at sunset
    burn red from dying embers -
    slumber til dawn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 5:02 PM
another one that I'd put as one of your best!!
Pettit Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 7:19 PM
They used to say "The sun never sets on the British Empire".
Martin Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 2:03 PM
Beautiful little morsel. Wonderful color words: sunset, red, embers, dawn. All very warm like a bright painting.
Kithinji Avatar
September 26, 2013 at 5:07 AM
As I will do beside you!!!
Singaram Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 11:29 AM
Nice Haiku :) Regards , C.S
Kendrick Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 1:35 PM
Very creative Haiku..Enjoyed reading your expressive work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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