Sunset

The mother of twilight How I love the spread of yellow! The fire path effect And the glory that watches Burning the crawling clouds. Sunset at the river, The arc at the its end Like a diadem of a queen. Memories run through me As I watch flashy trails on water, The dancing yellowish rays Like the wonders of fireworks. The sunset today Triggers in me... For every sunrise There is a setting. Just as we have come And will leave some day. GOODNESS LANRE 10/08/2013

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Skat A

Date: 8/20/2013 9:21:00 PM

a good winning poem....congrats... love ~SKAT~ :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/19/2013 5:15:00 PM

Goodness, a beautiful sunset poem ... congratulations!! PD

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/18/2013 9:09:00 AM

I enjoyed this sunset, congratulations.

Goodness Lanre
Date: 8/21/2013 1:48:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by sir. Congrats too.

Len Gasun

Date: 8/18/2013 5:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win my dear friend. Thank you so much for your very spectacular and outstanding poem. I love it so much and so enjoyed. Thank you so much as well for your full support. Have a blessed day! Big hugs! Love lots, Leonora

Goodness Lanre
Date: 8/21/2013 1:44:00 AM

Thanks Leonora. Do njoy urself.