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Measure me son, for the man I was. My sunset has come, and the man to dust. If I had the time, I would light your day. But even the brightest can fade away. I leave you now, the colors of end, the beauty of death and a day well spent. The darkness will come, don't be afraid, as your light will shine, and then it will fade. A world cannot live on light alone. A man has a future and then he is old. Show your warmth and touching rays, and be remembered as the brightest of days. Jeremy Aguire, 08/05/2013

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Date: 8/20/2013 9:13:00 PM
Hey Jeremy, .congrats... love ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/19/2013 5:05:00 PM
Jeremy, a beautiful sunset poem ... congratulations!! always Linda
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Date: 8/18/2013 3:56:00 PM
Jeremy an excellent write congrats on your win Shadow x smile
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Date: 8/18/2013 1:32:00 PM
Im so impressed with this piece. Well written. So many great phrases. congrats. BG
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Date: 8/18/2013 12:36:00 PM
- Jeremy, CONGRATULATIONS ON A GREAT FIRST PLACE!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/18/2013 4:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win my dear friend Jeremy. Thank you so much for your very spectacular and outstanding poem. I love it so much and so enjoyed. Thank you so much as well for your full support. Have a blessed day! Big hugs! Love lots, Leonora
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