Sunset

Sun goes down in abstract silences,
deep into the breath of primary colours.
The universe blends in perfumes
of passion’s passed moments.

Singing midnight in white rime
by cicada, lost in flowers lime,
dreams move in the senses of the universe—
setting atomic desire free.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Peppellini Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 7:01 AM
You've captured both "Butter-Scotch Afternoons " and "Sweet Caramel Evenings' in this short poem. Wonderful expression.
Dom Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 6:32 AM
'atomic desire' - I am inspired!
Voicu Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 9:31 AM
:) Thank you Michael!
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