Sunset

Oh
Serene
Setting sun
You turn the sky
Pink, Purple, Orange
How your colours promise
A better day tomorrow
In awe of your transient art
I savour this brilliant moment
until sky blue turns to the black of night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Eastman Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 8:04 AM
Great etheree write. Beautifully written.
Dietrich Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 10:33 PM
you do etheree really well, Nick. I have a chapbook just on this poetry form, which uses 55 syllables in total (my lucky number!!) Good one!
Merryman Avatar
January 4, 2012 at 6:51 AM
Nice etheree, Nick. I enjoyed your poem. Love, Kim
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