Sunset

Glorious amber
Set clouds ablaze at twilight
As the sun descends



For Poet Destroyer contest

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James Fraser

Date: 11/10/2011 1:03:00 PM

Many congratulations Janette on your fine win in pd's contest. Images of Sunsets are simply fantastic, and their all very different :)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/9/2011 2:59:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest, this paints a vivid picture of the setting sun...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2011 11:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Janette. Long time no see!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/8/2011 6:06:00 PM

Congrats Janette on an outstanding win with this brilliant beauty ... so nice to hear from u luv..hope all is going well for u and family too.. luv and blessings ...we moved into a new home this month.. big job but so worth it ... miss u much..

Jack Horne

Date: 11/8/2011 11:55:00 AM

Beautiful haiku, Janette. Many congrats to you too, my friend

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/8/2011 11:33:00 AM

An awesome image of sunset, Janette. Congratulations on your success in PD's contest. I especially like the way you describe the clouds as "ablaze at twilight." Out West you can see a lot of red sunsets, probably the inspiration for the song "Ghost Riders in the Sky." Well done! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/8/2011 6:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunset Haiku" contest Janette. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 11/8/2011 1:36:00 AM

Janette congrats on your win..David

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/7/2011 10:05:00 PM

JANETTE~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my SUNSET contest* this contest was awesome* I had to try a few HAIKUS of my own. Have a wonderful week, GOD BLESS,..p.d.