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Sunset

Take a frame and save forever The colors I did see Such a sight did eyes see never All this in a creation you painted just for me The red and yellow still glare brightly as I ponder on the scene that was before my eyes To describe the sight I experienced in wonder Has taken me numerous tries Vibrant trees and a misty mountain Were placed behind a great green field As the sky began to darken Radiant splashes were revealed The clouds were as wisps of cotton All in the world was tranquil and frozen A breath of sweet oxygen I had gotten My lungs experienced an intense explosion My pounding heart was overflowed And my watery eyes welled up In the quiet stillness a clam voice bellowed A song as sweet as the sweetest syrup The soft, gentle and pale blue sky looked so opaque and translucent in that instant there was no distance between you and I For a moment so pure there is no remnant However I know that I am yours forever just as you are mine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/14/2016 12:11:00 PM
rebekah awesomesauce, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2015 2:23:00 PM
Rebekah, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/18/2011 5:12:00 AM
What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future Rebekah. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/17/2011 5:18:00 PM
Beautiful!!
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