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Sunset

A dull, grey sky filled my day Clammy and dank the air stood When to my surprise the sun peeked out so bright Heavy and clumsy I stood in my way Depressed today it seemed I would But with the colors so vibrant I felt my mood turn light Down and deep I started to escape To my world dark and dank Yet this sunset was so beautiful I tried to freeze the event ‘tho depressed, my emotions I’ll reshape I’ll force out my darkness so rank I can see what the beauty of the world can prevent

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/30/2010 9:19:00 PM
I love the way you used the rhymes. and I just love the concept. Soup mail. Love Destiny
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