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Sunset Is it that easy for you to just walk away now from me…from us all those moments when there was only the two of us against the world Things have changed I know what time alone could not do silence, indifference and gravity has do you know my love that you are still all that I ever wanted in my day…my life..my bed I watch in silence as you prepare to leave taking a suitcase packed with nothing that ever mattered to me and a dream that is all I ever wanted in my life is it that easy for you Irish

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Date: 4/7/2010 12:56:00 AM
To all who think this is ME going thru a separation. It is a work of poetic fiction as I work out verse,stanza, etc. It is fiction. Thanks for concern over my situation but I assure you it is just a poem. Irish
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Date: 4/7/2010 12:26:00 AM
Your heart is heavy. I am very sorry for your loss. It is very painful I know. It takes two to tango, they say. A very well written poem though sad. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 3/26/2010 9:12:00 PM
i enjoy your title. the love that people feel within their heart, will always be there. .but will they listen to it, at times, many do hold their grudge or because they are tired, not wanting to mend it with the other. . deeper than their love.it does truly hurt. more than it can be explained to a certain point. great poetry. -Always&Foreve Lynette
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Date: 3/8/2010 2:08:00 PM
Ow my ..this poem is deep indeed,Heartwrenching and touching..Charma
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Date: 3/4/2010 12:17:00 PM
I am so happy your poetry is among the poetry I am reading this afternoon Michael. I wish you a day full of love and inspiration. Love,Carol
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Date: 3/4/2010 10:04:00 AM
YOUR HEART WILL MEND SOMETIMES PEOPLE DON'T REALIZE HOW GOOD THEY GOT IT UNTIL IT'S GONE FALESHIA
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Date: 3/4/2010 9:54:00 AM
Michael I really feel the sadness and sincerity in this... If someone wrote this for me I would never leave....Now I have read this I look forward to reading more.....Allie
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