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Sunset

the setting sun \ bleeds his sorrow \ streaking across sky \ before falling \ into the sea \ in a deep weep \ for you \ you who be \ lost to me.

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Date: 9/14/2023 12:03:00 AM
I love “ the setting sun bleeds his sorrow” so deeply moving and touching. Brilliant imagery too
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Sarah Ann Jullion
Date: 9/14/2023 4:35:00 PM
Thank you for commenting... your input is much appreciated.

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