Sunset

the setting sun  \  bleeds his sorrow  \  streaking across sky  \  before falling  \  into the sea  \  in a deep weep  \  for you \  you who be  \  lost to me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Empress Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 12:03 AM
I love “ the setting sun bleeds his sorrow” so deeply moving and touching. Brilliant imagery too
Jullion Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 4:35 PM
Thank you for commenting... your input is much appreciated.
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