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"Every sunset brings the promise of a new dawn"--RW Emerson

In the twilight's gentle chime, The sun's pursuit of clouds allowed, The canvas painted, red and blue, Day's grasp dwindles, fading true. Willow's limbs, in lake's embrace, No tears for joy's swift race, Blackbirds, Robins, flight's ballet, Seek refuge from the night's array. Seagulls, ducks, and geese convene, Darkness casts its eerie sheen, Ducklings' fate, a mother's plight, In the shadows of impending night. Cherry, eucalyptus, silhouettes stark, Eagles perch on branches dark, Owl claims its post, a sentinel's quest, As daylight yields to night's bequest. Sunset sparks thoughts, a vibrant dance, Lovers see love in twilight's trance, Lonely souls, dear love depart, Optimists sense a fresh, hopeful start.

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Date: 9/26/2023 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win, Dear Jay. You have created an exquisite description of sunset - you have included many details of the beautiful moment.
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Date: 9/11/2023 3:16:00 PM
You embraced the concept of twilght time very well. I loved the inclusion of all the animals.
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Date: 9/9/2023 8:47:00 PM
This is beautiful Jay. Your rhyming is lilting and eloquent. "Lovers see love in twilight's trance," The harmony and depth of your poem is breathtaking Jay. Thank you so much for such a lovely read you gave us today. Cheers SV
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Date: 9/9/2023 2:40:00 PM
Wow Jay- this poem is simply divine. Exquisite words, wonderful flow and rhyme. Incredibly poetic. ‘As daylight yealds to night’s bequest’ Love it! Thank you so much for sharing. Blessings.
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Date: 9/9/2023 11:17:00 AM
A beautiful, descriptive, rhyming poem! You have depicted the scenic beauty of sunset with exquisite images!
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Date: 9/9/2023 10:50:00 AM
A rhythmical beautiful poem very well crafted. Thanks for sharing.
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