Sunset

Shadows of the trees,
Fading from the evening sun;
Vanishing of light.

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L'Nass Shango

May 21, 2009 at 8:11 AM

Reminder me of my rural evenings watching dusk falls. Great write

Jim Wilson

May 20, 2009 at 10:03 PM

I can see the shadows merging. Great moment.

Ian Schnitzler

May 20, 2009 at 10:42 AM

Nicely done!

Ernilando Tugaff

May 19, 2009 at 8:59 PM

Beautiful and amazing Haiku. You did it again. Ernilando

Shirin Neshat

May 19, 2009 at 4:08 PM

nice.

Charmaine Chircop

May 19, 2009 at 3:14 PM

i can picture your write---breathtakingly beautiful,i love the sunset----charma

Sharon Winter

May 19, 2009 at 6:34 AM

Awesome capture. Cannot say much more cause everyone has said it! Love, Shar

Elizabeth Neal

May 18, 2009 at 11:27 PM

The sight of the fading sun and the shadows fading to night is amazing and you caputed it well.

Carrie Richards

May 18, 2009 at 3:19 PM

Yes....when I close my eyes, I can see such a scene....just lovely Raul ! ~ Carrie

Tyesha Ehigiator

May 18, 2009 at 1:49 PM

Wow, talk about beautiful imagery here, I haven't been on in awhile but I decided to check out a few and I'm glad I did, I love this haiku, you are so creative. I've been missing your work, Wonderful picture here, Keep up the awesome work, take care and God Bless, Tyesha

Jessica K

May 18, 2009 at 1:06 PM

beautiful! i invision everything from just these few words, truly amazing!!!

James Faulkner

May 18, 2009 at 12:36 PM

talking about imagery. this is great-love and peace:james

James Marshall Goff

May 18, 2009 at 11:58 AM

quite elegant! Raul! Jim

Hana Ryusaka

May 18, 2009 at 11:56 AM

I love the last line... so beautifully phrased. Thank you so much for taking the time to comment on my poems... I really appreciate your feedback =)

Nathan Leccese

May 18, 2009 at 11:34 AM

Wow! This paints such a beautiful picture with so few of words. Great job!

Nadia Shahwan

May 18, 2009 at 11:32 AM

Thrilling haiku. Pls consider collecting all your haiku with beautifulest images and publish it with hallmark. Thank you for viewing my poem.

Lena Townsend

May 18, 2009 at 11:21 AM

This is a lovely view of such a magical event. Your words create an image that allows the reader to experience the magic fully. You are an amazing writer. Smiles from Lolita