Sunset

Shadows of the trees, Fading from the evening sun; Vanishing of light.

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/21/2009 8:11:00 AM

Reminder me of my rural evenings watching dusk falls. Great write

Jim Wilson

Date: 5/20/2009 10:03:00 PM

I can see the shadows merging. Great moment.

Ian Schnitzler

Date: 5/20/2009 10:42:00 AM

Nicely done!

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 5/19/2009 8:59:00 PM

Beautiful and amazing Haiku. You did it again. Ernilando

Shirin Neshat

Date: 5/19/2009 4:08:00 PM

nice.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/19/2009 3:14:00 PM

i can picture your write---breathtakingly beautiful,i love the sunset----charma

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/19/2009 6:34:00 AM

Awesome capture. Cannot say much more cause everyone has said it! Love, Shar

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 5/18/2009 11:27:00 PM

The sight of the fading sun and the shadows fading to night is amazing and you caputed it well.

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/18/2009 3:19:00 PM

Yes....when I close my eyes, I can see such a scene....just lovely Raul ! ~ Carrie

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 5/18/2009 1:49:00 PM

Wow, talk about beautiful imagery here, I haven't been on in awhile but I decided to check out a few and I'm glad I did, I love this haiku, you are so creative. I've been missing your work, Wonderful picture here, Keep up the awesome work, take care and God Bless, Tyesha

Jessica K

Date: 5/18/2009 1:06:00 PM

beautiful! i invision everything from just these few words, truly amazing!!!

James Faulkner

Date: 5/18/2009 12:36:00 PM

talking about imagery. this is great-love and peace:james

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/18/2009 11:58:00 AM

quite elegant! Raul! Jim

Hana Ryusaka

Date: 5/18/2009 11:56:00 AM

I love the last line... so beautifully phrased. Thank you so much for taking the time to comment on my poems... I really appreciate your feedback =)

Nathan Leccese

Date: 5/18/2009 11:34:00 AM

Wow! This paints such a beautiful picture with so few of words. Great job!

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 5/18/2009 11:32:00 AM

Thrilling haiku. Pls consider collecting all your haiku with beautifulest images and publish it with hallmark. Thank you for viewing my poem.

Lena Townsend

Date: 5/18/2009 11:21:00 AM

This is a lovely view of such a magical event. Your words create an image that allows the reader to experience the magic fully. You are an amazing writer. Smiles from Lolita

Darleen Bilyeu

Date: 5/18/2009 11:06:00 AM

very beautiful scenery!!! love it!!!

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/18/2009 10:48:00 AM

I love the sunlight fading away in this piece..your creativity has blossomed so much under this form..well done.