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20 March 2021 Notes: Photo taken by yours truly during a winter sunset at Samnak Park, Busan, South Korea For "Tableau - 6 Lines Poetry Contest" Sponsored by Joseph May 1st Place Entered for " All Yours (April 2) Poetry Contest" Sponsored by Brian Strand 1st Place

Sunset

soft tangerine sight
prelude to twilight~
sunset’s passing grace
of her gentle gaze,
like the final glance
of a brief romance

appreciationlost lovenaturesunsetverse

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Andrea Dietrich

June 29, 2026 at 7:51 PM

So glad to see you made her short winner list. . big congrats to you

Susan Ashley

April 17, 2021 at 7:44 PM

Oh, the poetic beauty that flows from your gifted pen takes my breath away, JCB. The splendor of sunset fades too fast, but not the impact of your bittersweet verse. Congratulations for your wonderful win, dear poetess. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Smita Kulkarni

April 15, 2021 at 11:16 AM

Sweet and perfect! Congratulations!

Louvenia Duncan

April 13, 2021 at 7:27 PM

Nice poem!

Paulette Calasibetta

April 9, 2021 at 8:22 AM

Congratulations....a well deserved win! Your imagery, delightful. Blessings, Paulette

Kim Merryman

April 2, 2021 at 11:25 AM

A lovely tableau, JCB! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Anisha Dutta

April 1, 2021 at 11:01 PM

Congrats to win on your Brief Romnce. Blessings

Juliet Ligon

March 26, 2021 at 10:18 PM

I love your comparison of a passing sunset to a brief romance. Congratulations!

David Mohn

March 26, 2021 at 5:39 PM

Yours is my favorite that I have read...congratulations on this beauty JCB

Paula Goldsmith

March 26, 2021 at 2:50 PM

Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write and picture. Have a blessed day/weekend..........................

Alexis Y.

March 26, 2021 at 1:18 PM

Hi JBC, This is just lovely. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Sam Kauffman

March 26, 2021 at 11:17 AM

Wonderful JCB! Beautiful musical flow, delightful wording and amazing imagery - "sunsets passing grace," "like a final glance." This is a fav for me. All the best. Blessings and joy!