Sunset

Sunset

How happy is the hot with fire skyline!
Does the skyline make you shiver?
does it?

The decline that's really in the early morning,
Above all others is the twilight.
Does the twilight make you shiver?
does it?

I cannot help but stop and look at the fat sky.
Down, down, down into the darkness of the sky,
Gently it goes - the blubber, the heavyset, the heavy.

Written by Mintra J. Mankasingh 
July 24, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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June 23, 2021 at 7:20 AM
Hello Mintra Mankasingh, this poem is done beautifully done by you. enjoy your day my friend.
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