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Suns Generosity

Night fades away swiftly as brother Sun opens his illustrious eyes; how they glow through the puffball clouds, to enliven the day. He blows out breaths that warm Gaia’s aging chill, she is soothed. Fingers of the Sun Reaching out to Gaia’s back Blanket her shoulders.

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Matthew Anish

Date: 10/31/2018 4:51:00 PM

Who is Gaia again? I think that your poem has great warmth! Thanks for your comments! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/1/2018 3:19:00 PM

Gaia is another name for Mother Earth. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/30/2018 1:29:00 AM

I wrote about soaking up my Vitamin D in the sun on Sunday, which may be the same day. Like minds! Wow! I want to say this sounds like personification to me, M.L. but it is your poem, so haibun it is.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/1/2018 3:20:00 PM

Yes some of it is but, for some reason I wanted it in the form of a Haibun...I forget why, but, thanks.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/28/2018 4:40:00 PM

The warmth exudes!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/29/2018 9:05:00 AM

Good; I was hoping that it would. Thanks again.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/27/2018 12:53:00 PM

Yes, the sun truly gives us so much! ... I really enjoyed reading your wonderful poem M.L. I could literally feel the sun's rays reaching for my shoulders as I read these words :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/29/2018 9:06:00 AM

Me too; although I woke up this morning, shivering. Glad to see it outside after a rainy weekend. Thank you Kelly

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/26/2018 5:55:00 AM

Scenic imagery--well captured in your words.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/26/2018 7:08:00 AM

Thanks Vijay; I'm glad that you liked it.