M. L. Kiser Poet Haibun

Suns Generosity

 Night fades away swiftly as brother Sun opens his illustrious eyes; how they glow through the puffball clouds, to enliven the day.  He blows out breaths that warm Gaia’s aging chill, she is soothed.

Fingers of the Sun
Reaching out to Gaia’s back
Blanket her shoulders.

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Matthew Anish October 31, 2018 at 4:51 PM Who is Gaia again? I think that your poem has great warmth! Thanks for your comments! Peace & Love Matthew Anish M. L. Kiser November 1, 2018 at 3:19 PM Gaia is another name for Mother Earth. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks.

Caren Krutsinger October 30, 2018 at 1:29 AM I wrote about soaking up my Vitamin D in the sun on Sunday, which may be the same day. Like minds! Wow! I want to say this sounds like personification to me, M.L. but it is your poem, so haibun it is. M. L. Kiser November 1, 2018 at 3:20 PM Yes some of it is but, for some reason I wanted it in the form of a Haibun...I forget why, but, thanks.

Kim Rodrigues October 28, 2018 at 4:40 PM The warmth exudes! M. L. Kiser October 29, 2018 at 9:05 AM Good; I was hoping that it would. Thanks again.

Kelly Deschler October 27, 2018 at 12:53 PM Yes, the sun truly gives us so much! ... I really enjoyed reading your wonderful poem M.L. I could literally feel the sun's rays reaching for my shoulders as I read these words :) M. L. Kiser October 29, 2018 at 9:06 AM Me too; although I woke up this morning, shivering. Glad to see it outside after a rainy weekend. Thank you Kelly

Vijay Pandit October 26, 2018 at 5:55 AM Scenic imagery--well captured in your words. M. L. Kiser October 26, 2018 at 7:08 AM Thanks Vijay; I'm glad that you liked it.